Heather has extraordinary powers and she is apart of a world that no human is truly aware of. Her parents were murdered by a powerful group, called the elite, and now they want her as well. Heather has had many losses in her short life but she will rise and grasp her power.
My first try at writing hope to get better with every part
In part one we meet a young man called dante who suddenly dissapears to a planet where he meets a young girl called azumi. Growing in physical and mental strength they both need to figure out where they are and who brought them there
This is a couple of pages from a book I am writing, it's my first go at this so I don't really know what I'm doing, criticism is welcome along with any advice. Due to the supernatural occurrences in Somerset, England, writers all over the world have requested interviews with the person that stop...
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He was in the middle of a storm. His howls could do nothing against the raging wind. His belly was bleeding. The snow that brushed against his wounds seemed to boil at contact. He often rolled over in pain. The wind pushed the snow against his bloodstained body like knives. The snowflakes cut him...