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Short Story By: poet 3
Fantasy


Tags: reaper, fan, fantasy

This is the begining of a story I promised I would write for a very good friend of mine on this site.
So here it is Reaper!
If you like it so far, I will add LOTS more.
And maybe even make it a novel! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 15, 2007    Reads: 56    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Ben walked down the hallway, looking for his homeroom class. He looked at the doors reading the numbers above them. 225, 227, 229, 231....There it is! 223! Ben gripped the handle and pulled open the door.
"And who might this be?"
A sharp nosed man in his fifties crooned from the front of the room. Ben looked down and shuffled his feet and subconsciously dropped his hands to his pockets.
"I'm Ben..." He said shyly.
He hated talking in front of so many people. His bright purple eyes shone brightly from his dark blue skin. It was unusual to see a Dark Elf so close to the Elven city. So naturally, everyone in the room stared at him with awe. Ben shifted under their gaze as he watched them dissect him with their eyes.


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Comments:

OMG IM AN ELF AND A DRAK ELF THATS SO COOL!
..your 1 ov my best friends on this site 2 :)
999999999999999999999x999999999999999999999999999999 to the power of 999999999999999999999999999999 stars!

Posted: Sep 17, 2007

Author Comment:

THANK YOU!!!!
I luv you too!!
I luv dark Elves... THey are SOOOO cool!!!
I love all those stars...
I cant even do that math....
Wow!!!
Want me too continue I guess???
lol

Sounds like it could be a very interesting story! You should keep writing it! Five Stars because Dark Elves are awesome! Nicely Written. When are you gonna have another chapter of Destiny's Choice posted? By the way I have a new story posted called Y Chelmachwie you should check it out I think you might like it ... I hope! Anyway Goodwork!
Narduchil

Posted: Oct 27, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you, I wasnt sure if I should make it a Short Story or a Novel. I still havent decided, what do you think?
Anyway, I should have the eighth chapter up within this week,I hope! I have alot of homework to do, so It might take a little longer, but I will post it as soon as I have the time!
And I will definetly read your story, I'm sure I will like it!

Very interesting ! Is it complete or are you going to write a little more?

Posted: Feb 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Ummm, Actually this is the begining of a novel that is called "Courage Under Evil" It is just the begining, if you want to read more, read "Courage Under Evil"



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