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FIRE in the BELLY - Desire that beats everything

Novel By: Hina Hazrat
Flash fiction

What happens when power of education leaves behind hot cashes, credit cards, and huge amount of money? What happens when gender inequality talks high?

As we go along with the journey, the story revolves within lives of three best friends, who were raised in different fluctuating environments. With the power of education Inna, a girl belonging to a mediocre family and Seno, who was unexpectedly born becoming victim of violence, turning results of ultrasound false, kissed the success, giving their rich friend Neo, a rich girl, a lesson of pushing herself against the power of money-gravity.

However, as life proceeds, more morals come in way!
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Submitted:Jan 29, 2013    Reads: 10    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

Mr. Khan and Mr. Gohar were good childhood friends. Soon after Seno entered in life of Mr. Gohar, he kept his social life neglected. And even neglected Mr. Khan and his family who was his wonderful friend, no one knew why entrance of Seno had impacted so badly the social life of Mr. Gohar. Right after Mr. Khan shifted in the neighborhood of Mr. Gohar, he looked at him as a stranger. Mr. Gohar was just overpowered by the feeling of inferiority complex, thinking all the time that he is not blessed, and cursing every moment.

Mr. Khan had tried a lot to convince Mr. Gohar get back to his previous life, when he never stopped joking and making fun. He always thought of the time when Inna was born and the fun and love Gohar spread in the party. Memorizing all such happenings was enough for Mr. Khan have a well of tears in his eyes. Many times he hugged Mr. Gohar, but no body was successful in melting his frozen feelings against his daughters.

Before Mr. Khan and his wife could make plans for their summer trip. Mrs. Khan whispered in ears of her husband, "I think we should make Mr. Gohar and Seno join us". "Don't you know? He never listens to me!" Replied Mr. Khan. "I will talk to him", said Mrs. Khan.

Upon acceptance of Mr. Khan, Mrs. Khan talked to Mr. Gohar on call, and said with emotions, "I consider you my elder brother, and it is your sister's wish to join her and her family in summer trip. Being eldest brother, I don't think you will be replying with a no". "Ok", was the only word, which Mr. Gohar used for reply.

Mr. Gohar left a message in the inbox of Mr. Khan, "I will be coming, but Seno won't be coming". "Ah! That's not right, bring it just for the sake of Inna, she will be clapping alone in air otherwise, please", replied Inna's father. "Ok", was the reply from Mr. Gohar.

Days passed, exams were over, and the journey began. It was a wonderful trip to the northern part of Pakistan. Inna after many years breathed again the fresh air in mountains. They had a wonderful 30 days of time in many areas of Northern part of Pakistan. The journey turned out to be a real power for Inna and Seno both, as they shared best knowledge, best learning, became more closer to each other, shared their feelings and planned out their aims. Seno realized that meeting Inna was a gift from God, as se found a mirror of what her mother had said to her when she were a child and on calls when she was turning a big girl in eyes and gestures of Inna, who had always been keeping her parents happy. They captured beautiful pictures togetehr and planned out an amazing idea of writing a book on this journey and contribute some efforts in promoting tourism in their country. Inna decided that as she is good at writing, she will be writing for the images that Seno will be desiging which will solely be to promote tourism in Pakistan. With all constructive efforts added in the time of the journey, the time was over to say bye bye to this beautiful nature that reside in Northern Areas of Pakistan. While coming back to their homes, they realized the level of pollution, and other crisis which city lives have. While on journey back to their city, they saw white clouds turning black.


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