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FIRE in the BELLY - Desire that beats everything

Novel By: Hina Hazrat
Flash fiction

What happens when power of education leaves behind hot cashes, credit cards, and huge amount of money? What happens when gender inequality talks high?

As we go along with the journey, the story revolves within lives of three best friends, who were raised in different fluctuating environments. With the power of education Inna, a girl belonging to a mediocre family and Seno, who was unexpectedly born becoming victim of violence, turning results of ultrasound false, kissed the success, giving their rich friend Neo, a rich girl, a lesson of pushing herself against the power of money-gravity.

However, as life proceeds, more morals come in way!
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Submitted:Jan 10, 2013    Reads: 13    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   

A green eyed girl appeared and hit Seno's shoulder.

"Hey congrats you did amazing job," she said excitedly out of breath.

"Oh! Thank you. You are the same new comer, aren't you?" Seno asked.

While Neo was being envy she possessing green eyes.

"Yes! I am in your class it is my third day in your school," said the girl.

"Oh, where were you before?" Seno asked.

"I was in community school but now I am here and I have shifted in C-4." Inna replied.

"What? You know I live in C-3 and my friend Neo in C-2, by the way, your good name?" Seno asked with full excitement as she loved making new friends.

"Inna," said the girl and moved her hand towards Seno.

"I am new here in C- region I don't have friends but I really enjoyed this little conversation with you."

Seno shook her hand with Inna,

"So did I," replied Seno.

And yes, you rocked the whole school today with your talent!" Inna replied with a wink.

"Thanks Inna, it's easy to illustrate the emotions on a paper I will teach you someday."

"That's great!" said Inna happily.

The three of them started walking towards the car. Seno offered Inna to come with them as she is their neighbor now and Inna agreed. They all sat in the car fixed their belts and started chatting, "Why you shifted yourself here?" asked Seno. Neo was all quite. Neo was always quite when she was desirable to get something for her which would make her look prettier. As Neo was thinking to get something for herself, Inna told Seno that they were living in site area but her father's office was now transferred to the C region so they had to come here. Inna revealed the fact that she has no friends here, in this new region.

"Awww. Nothing to worry about! You will find our region the most excited place. I think this is the best place and above all we are friends now just call me up when you feel boring, we will be together," said Seno.

Inna smiled and felt so happy.

"By the way what results did you get in your last year exam in your previous school?" asked Seno.

"I got 5 As," replied Inna.

"Cool, I got 4 As and a single B," Seno pleaded.

The car stopped as they reached Neo's place. Neo and Seno said bye to Inna and guided her the way to her home as she was new in their area. Inna thanked them and got off the car. Neo ordered the driver to get her to the mall.

"Why? I am tired Neo, please lets go some other day, lets rest," said Seno while yawning.

"No way! I can't rest until I don't have them in my eyes," replied Neo aggressively.

"What are you talking about? What's that? Without which your eyes won't pass a single minute? Seno said, puzzled. "

Yeah, you are right they won't pass a single minute without them and I want that right now," replied Neo naughtily.

"Urgh! Idiot!" said Seno with full anger."

Let's move," smirked Neo to the driver and he drove them with speed and they arrived at the mall in a wink.

"Yes! There they are. I got them!" Neo rushed towards the shop.

"Excuse me! Would you mind showing me that pair of lens? That green one," said Neo to the man who was standing right in front of them.

The man did so and showed them the same pair which Neo had asked him for. Neo took them and she went straight to the mirror, put them in her eyes and said,

"This is what I wanted!" she paid the man for the lens and asked Seno, "How do I look?"

"Yeah, yeah you look pretty," replied Seno with a smile. "Now stop getting happy, let's get back to home, idiot." Seno pursed her lips fading her smile.

Neo was so excited she twisted and danced; Seno held her arms, pulled her and took her towards the door. They both reached the parking area and they moved towards the car.

"Hey uncle! How do my eyes look? I mean how do I look?" Neo asked her driver.

"Amazing my child" replied the old white haired driver with a smile.

"Are you serious? I won't fire you from the job" said Neo.

Her driver laughed and "amazing" was the only word which he said again.

Driver drove them to their area. Neo grabbed Seno's hand and looked for

C-3, where Inna lived. Neo rang the bell. A short heighten lady with same green eyes which Inna bears opened the door with a generous smile. She greeted them; her home was simple and sweet. Mrs. Aliyah, mother of Inna, recognized the two girls.

"You must be Inna friends, Inna is sleeping right now please come in," said Mrs. Aliyah.

"Yes we are her friends; I want to meet Inna. I mean we wanted to meet her." Neo said.

"Yes, Why not?" replied Inna's mum.

They entered the home. Neo was deeply noticing the simplicity of her home and the sweetness of her mother's words after all Mrs. Aliyah was so kind hearted and soft spoken.

They went straight to Inna's room as guided by her mother, pulled her hands and made her wake up. "Hey! How you guys are here?" said Inna with one eye and 30% mouth open.

"Oh my goodness how would you know? Neo has been eating my small brain right after from school up till now." Seno said with a tiring face. "

Yeah, Inna! Look at my eyes!" Neo asked.

Inna made a strange gesture at first as she did not get the point and looked at Seno; Seno gave her a confused smile. Inna got the point she could have been burst out with a huge laugh but she controlled and said "Um… oh... Yes gorgeous, very pretty."

"Thanks." Neo said.

Soon after that Mrs. Aliyah brought some snacks for them to eat, as the three of them were out of home since morning they were hungry so they filled their tummies. Both of them thanked Inna and her mother. Neo was so happy it was easy to make her happy. To make her happy it was enough to praise her. Neo left her home with all butterflies in her tummy.


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