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Submitted: Jul 23, 2008    Reads: 43    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


DARKLY

By nEoPOL

A 100 word flash fiction

Darkly, he fell to the floor, face wet, hands bloodied. How had this happened? Why had this been done? The world shattered around him, shards still penetrating his tough exterior.

Standing over the body, the result of a violent exchange, he turned towards the light of the world which shone through the window, sunlight piercing his soul, a forlorn reminder that a life had been taken, and he had committed the most unfprgivable sin.

The darkness of greed and anger had taken him for but a moment, and now for eternity, his sins will forever mark him; a murderer.


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