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The Red Rose

Short Story By: Nixie
Flash Fiction


This was a flash peice I wrote (at least 5) years ago, and I just found it in one of my notebooks. It's small, but Ikinf of like it. Hope you do too. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 26, 2008    Reads: 142    Comments: 9    Likes: 6   


Erin squinted, her eyes locating the fine needle cutting through the stem of the single red rose. Once removed she cupped the head of the flower in her hands and lifted it to her nose, the smell reminding her of her Nan’s garden as it was when she was a child. The scent quickly sent her into an intoxicating daydream that left her smiling at the days she‘d ran free along the freshly cut grass with her brother.

Her Nan loved her garden, especially the red roses. Her love for them began the day Erin’s granddad gave her Nan a single red rose and a set of gardening gloves for their very first wedding anniversary. It had been tradition since that day to plant a new flower every May, which was the month of their anniversary. Their garden was beaming with colour; the best though was always the red roses.

The years passed and the garden just got brighter when the grandchildren came along. The scent was full of memories and always sent Erin back there. All it took was one rose.

It was tradition but then of course, Erin’s mother followed her own passion and not her Nan’s. Her mother was not much the gardener, rather a cook and instead opened her own café and called it The Rose Cafe. There by the entrance of The Rose Café, was a basket of red roses from Erin’s Nan’s garden.

Her mother married a few years into her business, when profits where low along can a man, both handsome and rich who offered to buy a percentage and invest. Once together, The Rose Cafe bloomed! It was as if the fates had planned it all, the ups and the downs all for that one moment.

Erin closed her eyes and inhaled the scent of the rose again as a soft breeze came from the open window to her right where she knew her friend was sitting.

“Are you ready?” her friend asked.

A voice came softly beside her and she looked up, surprised to see her friend there in front of her waiting for an answer. Looking over her friends shoulder she saw her mum and her Nan both holding a bunch of red roses.

Erin nodded firmly, “Yes, I think so” she answered, though her voice was not as firm as her nod.

Erin’s mother stepped forward and reached out, taking the single red rose from her in exchange for the bouquet of roses. The single red rose was for him, her husband to be.

“I will make sure he gets it” her mother said softly. “Now, don’t you just look beautiful!” she beamed proudly.

“Absolutely!” her Nan agreed.

Erin held the bouquet to her chest and turned toward the mirror which stood to her left, checking her dress for the last time. At last, she smiled to herself; it was her turn to take part in their tradition by using nothing but red roses from her Nan’s garden, for her wedding day!


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Comments:

Traditions. Can be the scariest of times or the mightiest of times!

Like your poetry, Gratitude, a pleasant reminder.

Wonderful.

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

It's always such a compliment to have you read my work, I don't know if you know how treasured you are here on Booksie?! I've read your new poem too, it's just simmering away at the moment, you know how that goes, I will be back to comment. Anyhow, thanks Classy. :) ~ Nixie

Very fragrant, warm and romantic. I love red roses.

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Me too, I love white roses too (I wonder what that means?!). Thanks for reading Anna, always appreciate your comments. ~ Nixie

excellent work. you should send this to a magazine - and there are many crying out to read this. let me know if you are interested and I'll send you some names etc.

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? Yeah of course I am interested, let me know. Thanks Gazzavis, glad you liked it. ~ Nixie

Another great one...the only thing that I can see for an error is near the end (like just lookbeautiful)Thanks for sharing, Take Care, Ted

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Booksie keeps sticking the words together! If I try and change it on my home computer it makes it worse so I will wait till I get to work to sort that out. Thanks for telling me, Ted. I'm pleased you enjoyed it! :) As always, thank you for reading. ~ Nixie

Wonderful story. It is amazing how people forget about family traditions now a days. I really got into this story. You did a great job on itmy friend. Thanks for sharing it. :)

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Michael, you know how to make me smile! I don't have any traditions like this, but if I were to say a tradition it would probably come down to food and my mums lasagne! :) It is the best, and everyone gathers on the chosen day to have some. Well, thank you again for a great comment, it always means a lot. ~ Nixie

Really great peice of work.......loved it....til later juliet

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Juliet, thank you so much, always nice to hear from you. ~ Nixie

I love symbolism in a story and in life~especially when it just happens as a coincidence~nice piece Nix;)
~rain

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw, thanks Rain, glad you like it. I always look forward to your comments. ~ Nixie

A lovely read from a gorgeous lady with a heart filled with pure and pure thoughts....

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

You are too sweet, do you know that? Thank you again, I'm one happy gal! :) ~ Nixie

really nice!

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw, thank you so much! Cute little heart too. ~ Nixie



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