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The Thunderstorm

Short Story By: Nixie
Flash Fiction


Another one I wrote a long time ago and blew the dust of off. Thanks to Dragonfly for having a ganders before posting. :) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 24, 2008    Reads: 114    Comments: 7    Likes: 6   


She woke up, hands bound by mine and her skin damp from the heat. Her shifting and slow movements didn‘t wake me as the erratic light from outside flickered, tracing us as one against the wall. She took a deep breath and as her chest rose, delicate drops run their course where lips and fingertips once did.

She looked across, her dark hair tangled and her body limp. Her breathing was heavy, dry and faulty and reminded her of our desperate mouths and quick fingers, popping buttons and forceful hands.

I smiled at her when she noticed I‘d woken. Her eyes were soft, gentle and warming and she leaned over for a morning kiss, fierce for a taste just like before.

She pulled back and whispered against my lips “Did I wake you?”

My ears adjusted to the sound outside and I shook my head “No, there’s a storm outside.”

She looked up toward the open window where the humid air fought for it’s release and the rain played a simple tune against the glass.

The thunder brewed with vengeance and fury and a bright light manifested as her hand brushed my hair from my face. I searched her, I wondered how she hadn’t noticed the storm.

Without asking her the question she answered “I was to busy watching you.”


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Comments:

Nixie's back.
This is pure Nixie writing.
Well, as I see you anyway.
Divine.

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Ah sweet, thanks Classy. This was actually an old piece which i found and dusted off. Still, I'm BACK! Love it! :P ~ Nixie

awwww. that was soooooooo cute. That last line put a huge smile on my face lol. I loved it, as I love all your writting. Brilliant!
Steph:)

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw thanks Steph, your comments are so encouraging, it's such a relief to hear you loved it. Your awesome! ~ Nixie

Katie
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This is adorable! :)

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Katie! :) ~ Nixie

Irwin
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Excellent stuff Nixie. Very competent piece of writing.

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

That's a huge compliment, thank you Irwin. ~ Nixie

Genius. I do not have enough thumbs for this.

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

WOW! Never heard you say that before. :) I'm chuffed, thanks Eric. ~ Nixie

A humid thunderstorm has never read so well!! Brilliant description and scene setting, you must have always had the gift of giving us just enough to mentally start salevating and take away just at the critcal moments!!!

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Ah, I'm not sure. I don't always write so well, I have my moments of doubt but you know, your comments always make me see the best in what I write and I really appreciate that. I can't thank you enough. Will be seeing you tomorrow matey. :) ~ Nixie

I don't know why, i have taken so much time to read it and again i have to say that you are great.

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw, thank you, I appreciate you taking you reading this Jbortti. It was an old piece but it's quickly becoming a favourite of mine. :) Thanks again! ~ Nixie



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