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Erotica. For adults only please. View table of contents...
Submitted: Sep 20, 2008 Reads: 710 Comments: 17 Likes: 7
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This was hot, lol.
I only wish it was longer, for this story truly made me happy.
Posted: Sep 20, 2008
I very nice quickie! If I may say so...hehehe. A good descriptive short, short story. Good job.
Posted: Sep 21, 2008
Ditto from both above. Hot stuff. Wish it was longer too....
Posted: Sep 24, 2008
are you adding more please say your adding ore this is a hot start to a hot story
Posted: Sep 24, 2008
Left me wanting more, so to speak...
Posted: Sep 25, 2008
Heard it all before
Posted: Sep 25, 2008
That was fast~short but sweet! Sorry for such a common cliche` but it fits so well here; nice quicky!! ~rain
Posted: Sep 25, 2008
.......what!?...done already!
erotica is not really my thing, i prefer sensual meaning than direct approach, plus i seem lost on the purpose here; yet it was enjoyable!
Please do check out some of my work :)
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
Nicely written, short and to the point. Got me a little.. -covers mouth- Nice job.
-dd
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
Hot.
Posted: Sep 27, 2008
very short but hot
Posted: Sep 30, 2008
phew........i really ran out.love the way you have written it.i agree with all. HOT,HOT,HOT.
SAD THAT IT ENDED FAST
Posted: Oct 8, 2008
Very good, please make it longer!!!!
Posted: Oct 9, 2008
mmmmmm
Posted: Oct 16, 2008
ey, wish there was more, got me rushed a bit
Posted: Oct 17, 2008
Very Hot, and very fast!
Posted: Oct 25, 2008
You gotta love those morning quickies huh?
I really enjoyed this. Bravo! :)
It definately heated up my cold afternoon.
Posted: Nov 20, 2008
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