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Submitted: Sep 20, 2008    Reads: 710    Comments: 17    Likes: 7   


"Dammit, Janine, wake up!"
            A lock of black hair emerged from the hotel room covers. She barely let out a mumble, when the blanket was torn from her warm sleepy body. "Carrie, just give me five more minutes. Please?" Still in her fetal position, Janine stretched out her legs and arms.
            "C'mon, let’s get up and get the party started! It’s almost eleven. We have the art festival to go to, we have to scout for cute guys, and we're going to the club tonight. We might even get laid tonight."
            Carrie threw herself onto the bed and onto Janine. She attacked her neck with kisses, grabbing her at the waist. She straddled Janine and sat up. "I'll do it if you don't get up. I swear I will."
            "Mmmmm. What if I want you to?"
            Carrie smiled at her. She bent down and kissed her squarely on the mouth, tongue licking at her lips, making them moist. She pulled her t-shirt up and sucked on her nipples, making them erect. Her hands smoothed over her skin, trickling them down to her panties. She whispered, "I swear, I'm gonna do it."
            "You go right ahead, then. Take what you want, darling."
            And so Carrie did. She put her hand inside her panties, inside a warm and wet spot. She fingered the clitoris back and forth, while still suckling her nipples. Janine's breath became faster and hoarser. The spot just getting more and more wet. Finally, Carrie pulled down the panties, kissing her. Sucking her, licking her, until she came in her mouth.
            "Mmmm. That's my girl. Now, what do you say we get ready for the day?"


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Comments:

This was hot, lol.
I only wish it was longer, for this story truly made me happy.

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

I very nice quickie! If I may say so...hehehe. A good descriptive short, short story. Good job.

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

Ditto from both above. Hot stuff. Wish it was longer too....

Posted: Sep 24, 2008

are you adding more please say your adding ore this is a hot start to a hot story

Posted: Sep 24, 2008

Left me wanting more, so to speak...

Posted: Sep 25, 2008

Heard it all before

Posted: Sep 25, 2008

That was fast~short but sweet! Sorry for such a common cliche` but it fits so well here; nice quicky!! ~rain

Posted: Sep 25, 2008

.......what!?...done already!

erotica is not really my thing, i prefer sensual meaning than direct approach, plus i seem lost on the purpose here; yet it was enjoyable!

Please do check out some of my work :)

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Nicely written, short and to the point. Got me a little.. -covers mouth- Nice job.

-dd

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Hot.

Posted: Sep 27, 2008

very short but hot

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

phew........i really ran out.love the way you have written it.i agree with all. HOT,HOT,HOT.
SAD THAT IT ENDED FAST

Posted: Oct 8, 2008

Very good, please make it longer!!!!

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

mmmmmm

Posted: Oct 16, 2008

ey, wish there was more, got me rushed a bit

Posted: Oct 17, 2008

Very Hot, and very fast!

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

You gotta love those morning quickies huh?

I really enjoyed this. Bravo! :)

It definately heated up my cold afternoon.

Posted: Nov 20, 2008



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