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Carlos In Control PT 3

Short story By: TheFizz20
Gay and lesbian


carlos fleas the scene and loses the money. he runs home and tried to get his mom to flea too. see what happends


Submitted:Feb 23, 2010    Reads: 47    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


fuck theres about 10 or 15 people gatherd around. they have all seen my face. not to mention the cars that are stopped im certen one car at least called the cops. i was fucked. theres a 100k in this car and it wont move. i had to split if i didnt they i would go down with the car. i get out my head is hurting. people all around "hey man you alright" i did speak to them i didnt even look at any of them. i couldnt help but to just run i was aobut 5 miles from the apartments. i had no i dea what i was going to do about it. i kept looking back at the car that had the money. fuck.

after running for about ten min. i was in the clear from any cops. i can see the apartments up ahead. i look back to see if there were anycars. i see sals car in thw distance coming from where i  crashed. fuck i didnt know he was there. there was only on way out of our little city and everyone took the same road he must hae recognized the car. i start to run to my house.i didnt know what i was going to do. i get in the front door. i see my little brother. drag him to the front of my mothers room. "mom we need to go now!" she asked me why i didnt want to tell her. all i could do now is apologize and hope for the best. i pleaded with her to leave. before i knew it sal foot was kicking in the door.

"ill pay you back" i told him he looked pissed throwing it in my face how much money it was. he was going to make certin i payed him back. he looked at me and then my brother. then my mom. "oh you going to pay me back" he grabs my mom. she screams to let her go. "please no im sorry" my tears did little to sway his mind. he was heartless and didnt care about me or my family.

sam wants to run after her i couldnt let him get taken to. sal said i would get my mom back after i worked off the money. how long would that take. why did i agree to do this. i cant believe i singal handedly ruine my brothers and my mothers life. i had failed and i didnt know what to do. my dad gone now my mom. i just stood there on the floor hugging my brother. "this is my fault. im sorry" was all i could say to him.





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