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Submitted:Dec 14, 2011    Reads: 22    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   

Chapter One: Prologue

My name is Raphael Chaos… I'm writing this while looking threw my window into this open world…It could've been a great city if ruled by the "one". I miss the old days when we used to share the wheat, laughs and cries with each other! But No! They must ruin our lives and spit on our freedom in public! Freedom…A word no more in the dictionary of our lives. It passed the generations and it's now forbidden! And no one can reach it no matter what's the motive, way and cause! It's time for an initiative move… We must block…

-Hey Ralph! What are you writing?! Get up and help your father!


-Show me that!

-No!! (Throwing the book in his chest and locking it up quickly)

-Give it to me!!! (Slapping him in the face)

Poor Ralph…His parents were killed in the public when he was young, And he was given to an imperial family to raise…
My name is Raphael Chaos and I'm a native that his parents were killed for pursuing freedom…

My name is Raphael Chaos and I seek vengeance upon my enemy…

-ARGHHH!!!!! (While being slammed on the head with something hard)

The house was on fire! He was barely conscious! He wrote:

Blur is what I see * Light is what I seek


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