Everyone is the star of parent eye but I am thorn of parent eye since I was born ………………. L
I was born on 14 October 1993
Moreover, today I complete 17years of my life.
I hate my life and do not know why living on this earth.
Characters of story
Jennifer George- 17 yrs old girl
Jack long- 20 yrs old person and neighbour of Jennifer.
Peter – Lord of asvin.
Story begin from Jennifer school
Julia- Jennifer happy birthday
Jennifer- thank you J
(Rest of her friend wishing her happy birthday)
Jennifer- I invite you to all for my birthday party.
(According Jennifer friends, she is very calm and sharp-minded girl and nice in study she gives best in every field)
At house of Jennifer
Julia- hey Jennifer looking beautiful and this for you.
Jacky- hey my dear this for you
Jennifer- thanks to all.
Come on enjoy the party.
(Jennifer get parcel from postal worker, then she take in room and opened it so find that it puzzle of map and note. In that note, she read, “hey I am your neighbour jack long
This is my gift for you
If you want to know that,
Why you are living in this world so you have to solve this puzzle,
After solving it you will find a place where future book is present but it is under the hands of lord of asvin (it is dual god who make harmony with people and make treaty to god they guide us by symbol and arise mercy in our mind towards foreign people)
I want to meet you today on custom tree bridge at
10:30 am sharp do not get late and I know that you special.
At custom tree bridge
Jennifer- what is this ah you know what the time , I am waiting for one hour and you coming right now you know I missed my dance class only for meet you mister
Jack long- sorry for waiting and for your dance class
Jennifer- ok tell me why you want to meet me
Jack long – ok I know that you are special and something different about you
Jennifer- wow o wait are call here to tell me this all gross I think you like that fairy stories so for kind information there is a c.d. store behind your house
Jack long- wait, you did not want to know about that book?
Jennifer- aaaaa I want to know
Jack long- so just clam down and listen me
Then jack tell her that when he was 5 yrs old boy he went asvintica with his family (cause his family work in histological site and they find antique for know past of god)
So when he with grandfather
Therefore, they find a book, which embedded in rocks.
They both take out it and his grandfather reads first word of that book,
suddenly angels come around them put sword on the neck of jack and say give that book give that book otherwise your grandson out of this world and his grandfather give that book but these all angel are not good they killed there grandfather and there parent in front of jack.
Jennifer- well your story is quiet inserting
Jack long – inserting I am telling you my life and you
Jennifer- ok why you shouting as I killed your family
And what is role in whole story of your
Jack long- your role is that only less than 18 yr old girl can reads that book.
Jennifer- but that time your grandfather reads
Jack – Yes but now, you only reads cause you only 17 yrs old girl.
Jennifer- ok tell me where we have to go?
Jack- ok give me your cell number
Jennifer- ok take it is 5666966696
(As Jennifer say her cell number jack mind strike that he listen this number some where before)
Jack- ok I will call you bye
(As Jennifer takes leaves jack feels that everything is moving slowly and he see a drop of water falls on bridge and it starts breaking there Jennifer Find that she left her purse on bridge so she turn back so see that whole bridge is gone to break so run towards jack and pulled out from bridge.)
JENNIFER- JACK WATCH OUT!
(Both of them fall down in river but anyhow Jennifer save jack and take out from river)
Jennifer – oh my god what is it?
Jack – I don’t know anyway thank you to saving my life
Jennifer- it my pleasure
At next morning-
(Jennifer cell ringing, takes it, and says)
Jack- hey good morning Jennifer
Jennifer- hey jack so say what to do?
Jack- this we gonna to meet some plan place like morning hotel
At morning hotel
Jack- hey Jennifer
Jack- is there any short form of your name except Jennifer
Jennifer- you can call me jenny
Jack – ok
Jennifer- what our next step?
Jack- we are going to asvintica.
Jennifer- what are you mad means I didn’t get permission from mom or from dad.
Jack- ok I understand but you have to go please anyhow convince your mom and dad
Jennifer- ok I will.
Jack- but you didn’t tell me that you solve the puzzle or not?
Jennifer- ah that puzzle is so easy I solve just in ten sec
Jack- what are you serious
Jack- ok nevertheless
We will meet on next day at near tomb square ok
(Last night she convince her mom and dad and she packed her bag )
Morning near tomb square
Jennifer- hey is this
Your car, which is looking like 1945 years old
Jack- so what you thinking about a I ten car.
(Then went to asvintica together in jack car)
(As they reach there, jack fastly comes out from car and towards the door of asvintica, place then Jennifer shouts him)
Jennifer- jack hold down wait I am coming .
(As jack went near the gate of asvintica he through a hold he see that asvins and sin are sitting together and laughing and asvin and sin are marry together)
(As Jennifer near come to near jack, jack pulled her back
Jack- Jennifer runs toward car
(They both runs toward car)
Jennifer – tell me what happened
(Then jack tell her what he saw there)
Jennifer- it means we have to do little preparation
Jack- what preparation.
Jennifer- I have plan
(Then Jennifer tell her plan to jack and jack agree with it)
They start collect the weapons like holy water, silver bullet, sword, a belt of father, bible, torch etc.
Jacks takes sword, gun
Jennifer’s takes belt of father, bible and holy water.
At night they reach to gate asvintica
Now jack mind strike that when he came with grandfather speak a code but he can not remember it and in time Jennifer say our cell no and door open
Jack- cool you know it.
Jennifer- I just say it.
(As door open, they see a long dark corridor)
Jack- Jennifer light up the torch.
(As Jennifer light torch so something fall on neck of jack)
Jack- oh my god what is?
Jennifer- wait I see it.
(As Jennifer put light on his neck, so see a very dangerous creature so through holy water on it and that creature die)
(Suddenly some sticky thing fall on Jennifer shoulder so she put torch towards roof so she saw that thousand of same creature are there)
Jack – Jennifer run
(They both run and these creatures are behind them)
Jack- Jennifer! Through, torch away.
(When Jennifer through torch away so, dark again, and both fall down and slip in to water pound and these move towards torch light.)
In water pound
Jennifer- jack are you holding my hand
(Jennifer turn her neck towards her left hand there she a girl holding her but she is not so pretty and her nail are looking iron nail actually that girl is mermaid but not fairy tales, she twisted her tales and hit to jack and jack unconscious)
That mermaid- come with me lord want you
Jennifer- leave me you dirty mermaid.
(here jack one drop of blood fall in water and thousand of same mermaid up out from water and moving towards jack
So Jennifer slip her hand and swim toward jack )
Jennifer- jack wake up wake up jack
(Then Jennifer put holy water in pound and all mermaid are burnt away)
(Jennifer takes out jack from water)
Jennifer- jack common listen open your eye jack
Oh god what I do
(Then jack take breathe)
Jennifer- thanks god you alive
Jack- are you ok
(Suddenly a bright light shine there)
Jennifer- I do not want any more shock.
Jennifer- grandpa! are you mad jack he was passed away
Jack- no Jennifer look there
(Jennifer saw there really jack grandpa standing)
Jennifer- oh my god
Jack grand pa- my son I m so sorry to you that I leave you like this .
Jack- no grand pa
Jennifer- waits what is happening here.
Grand pa – my child you know why you here cause you have love feeling towards jack
Jennifer- what are you saying!
Grandpa- it true listen jack you have to reach to lord of asvin.
Jack- how can grand pa?
Grand pa – just believe in god and you will find way.
(And jack grand pa soul disappear)
Jennifer- so you really think that something between us.
Jack- what you think
Jennifer- I don’t think
Jack- lets take this way I think this way is empty
Jennifer- really I do not think so because every empty place is full of adventure
Jack- are you making fun of mine
Jennifer- whatever you think
Jack- hoooo so
Jennifer- what so ah
(And jack hold her in arm and I love you and they kiss, as they kiss a bright light appear and at Jennifer back a pair of wing arise and jack also and they both look like angel)
(But one of bat which hang on roof, he fly away and give information to lord about them)
Lord asvin- let him came here
Angel gets them here
(A big force of angel flies towards them)
Jennifer- jack you hear something
Jennifer- run jack
Jack- why run we have wing
Jennifer- ho yes so fly
(They fly but angels catch them and fall down on land and they put sword on neck of jack and talk to Jennifer)
Angels – did I cut his neck or you come with us .
Jennifer- no no please don’t I will come with you
(But angel hit on jack head and jack fall down)
(And angel takes Jennifer to lords asvin)
(In room of lord asvin)
Lord asvin- welcomes my dear
Lord asvin- ho remembered me
Jennifer- but you where passed away
Peter- no dear
Jennifer- how can you come here
Peter- very simple dear just have evil feeling my love
Peter- yes, you didn’t remember our meeting.
Jennifer- it is just a kind of affection and nothing else.
Peter- but that affection is gonna be true
Peter- means we are going to marry
(Then peter give order to servant that take her in room dressed for marriage and cut down her wings)
Jennifer- please don’t
(And there servant cut her wing)
There jack wake up and start finding Jennifer
(Jack opens his pair of wings and fly while flying he saw a light guiding him and go in it way)
He saw a door so he landed down and suddenly that door opened and huge dragon come out
Jack- what a hell is this
(And fighting arose between them, sometime jack upon dragon, sometime jack upon dragon then takes a blast of fire from mouth on jack, but jack covered himself by wings then fly over on dragon and jabs sword in dragon head and dragon die.)
(Suddenly grandpa soul come there and says)
Grandpa- well done my boy,
I accepted this form you, now you will take right turn from here and you reach to lord asvin place, promise me that you never leave her.
Jack- I promise you grandpa
Grandpa- this last time you see me because my work is complete which lead by god.
(And jack grandpa soul disappear)
(Jack enter in place of lord asvin)
Peter- welcome jack
Jack- where is Jennifer?
Peter- calm down, she is fine and ready for marry to me
Peter- yes she didn’t that I m his first love, oh how bad
Jack- what you are saying?
Peter- I m saying right thing and it is true
Jack- just tell me where is Jennifer?
(Suddenly Jennifer came there)
Jennifer- you run away from here they will kill you
Jack- without I m not going anywhere
Jennifer- no jack you do not understanding
If I marry with peter, so they will leave you
Jack – no Jennifer I promise to grandpa that I never leave you and let it that book in wrong hands.
Jennifer- jack please go
Peter- oh what great love between you?
Jack- leaves Jennifer
Peter- no I m not going to leave her and she going to be my wife and our child will ruled the world and she read that book and world in my hand.
Jack- you alive so it happened
Jack- I m challenging you, if I drown you so Jennifer is mine
Moreover, if you drown you me so Jennifer is yours.
(Now fighting being between them)
(Peter hit jack by his sword and jack give return back of hit by his sword, peter give heavy fist in jack stomach and mouth so jack fall down but jack stand again and fight with peter but peter again fall down him)
Peter- dear jack good-bye
Jennifer- no jack you cannot leave me alone common jack stand up and beat this dirty creature.
Peter- what you said to dirty creature
(Jennifer take jack sword and attack on peter leg so he fall down)
(Jennifer run towards jack but peter holds her foot and she fall down but Jennifer holding jacks sword so she cut peter hand and run towards jack)
Jennifer- jack wake up
Jack- Jennifer sorry
Jennifer- no, you cannot leave me alone like this
You have to complete the promise of grand pa
(Then jack stands up and peter also stand up but this jack run towards peter and cut off head of peter and peter body fall down and turn into ashes)
(In mean while Jennifer find book and reads it)
To be continue……………