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RIVER OF SCREAMS

Poem By: Dark Skylight
Horror


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Submitted: Jul 12, 2008    Reads: 28    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


Theres a city of darkness.

River of pain and blood.

A place called hell.

City was dark without sky.

City was black without sun.

In that horrible place

horror ruled.

Horror and deat.

One river was in it.

River full of mistery.

River of blood,and

River of weird sounds.

Scary and terriffied sounds.

If a human would hear them,he

would be dead in a second.

He would be part of it.

Part of the river.

She was mistery for everyone.

Some evil creaturs tryed to drink

that horrible water in it,because

something was atracting them.

Something not good,

Something terrible.

Smell of rottness and

Taste of raw blood.

They had to drink it.And

they died too.

River was full of dead memeoryes

and

lost hearts.

Full of sounds.Such sounds that

you cant even imagine.

Dead souls were screaming for help.

Blood was falling from theyr eyes,

and screams were getting

louder and louder.

Noone to hear.

Noone to help.

Lost in theyr own sounds they had

no chance.

They were convicted to life without light.

To life in that terrible place.

To life in

RIVER OF SCREAMS.


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Comments:

AMAZING! *aplaudes* I loved it. lol. you should make a story about it. I would certainly loves that. I loved how it was sooooooo depressing. Make it a tad more depressing though.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol,thaanks soo much!!Im very glad that you like this.
Thanks again!
:)

Ezeh Chibuoke
(not registered user)

Yoo man you are really a good writer, Everybody in booksie writes great gut keep it up....
I LIKE IT
To life in that terrible place.

To life in

RIVER OF SCREAMS

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

lol,thank you soo much!
:)

only two comments on this i thought this was very good. almost identicle to my writing style i rly loved it

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!I dont know why,but like last week I started to write like this,lol...Well,thanks again.
:)



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