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Controlling the Bullet (A Deadly Fantasy III)

Poetry By: MssJenn

Any body willing to play the game?

When i close my eyes this what i see... A premonition maybe?
or just a Deadly Fantasy.

.... don't know what is this exactly..... not a poem, not a story??? oo h well enjoy people, foes and friends XD

Submitted:Jun 16, 2009    Reads: 158    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   

Controlling the Bullet (A Deadly Fantasy III)

I feel something inside of me.
He is whispering things to me and when I don't do them he takes control of my body and does them himself.
Now I stand on my living room.
All my family aligned in front of me.
I don't remember what happened before
How did I get into this scene?
The heavy metal that once felt cold in my hands now is hot and slippery with my sweat.
This time I see myself alive, I am me. (If that makes sense)
I'm alive!
Wasn't this supposed to be premonitions?
Why does it change every day....?
"Talk to them" the voice whisper from inside my head. "Explain the game rules"
A smile creeps on my face
A smile that was not mine.
A wicked smile
I pointed the gun at my mother, and she twitches when she felt the danger on her, she closes her eyes.
Then my aim goes to my sister
After her my brother
I lower my aim to the floor and talk real slow
"This is a game I want to play people."
"The Russian roulette. I- I control the bullet my friends"
I smile again, this time was my smile
The fun of the game getting to me already
"eeny" I point to my mother
"meeny" to my sister
"miney" my brother
"moe" my friend that's kneel in the comer weeping
"Catch a tiger by its toe" I pointed to the intended victim
"eeney meeney miney moe. Catch a tiger by its toe"
"Bomp!" I scream before the real bomb comes to my head
Like I said I control the bullet my friends…

} Why the hell am I dead? (A Deadly Fantasy I)

Who is going to kill me? (A Deadly Fantasy II)

Controlling the Bullet (A Deadly Fantasy III)

Who Controlled the Bullet (A Deadly Fantasy IIII)


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