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Please Don't kill me. Please don't kill me. There's a murderer in my house. Im going to die. Oh MY GOD HELP ME! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 16, 2008    Reads: 68    Comments: 9    Likes: 4   


It was a dread full day. My girl

friend broke up with me and

I felt like I was going to die any second

The worse part was that it was my birthday

For my present she gave me a wooden puppet

Before she gave it to me she said you are my puppet

I wasn't scared. I never believed in

these kinds of things. But I did when

a terrible event happened. I was at home

talking to my parents. They were yelling at me cause

Sohpie broke up with me. They said it was my fault

I didn't see how. But then it happened.

I heard a rattle in the kitchen. I ignored it.

Then, the lights went off. The phone went dead.

Now I was becoming weird. I already paid for the phone and electric bills.

Once again I wasn't scared. But it was weird.

I heard the window break into thousands of sharp pieces.

Then, paper flew everywhere as wind blew.

I opened a drawer and picked up my loaded

magnum. I was scared now. There was someone

or something in my house. There was a candle floating in mid air.

But there was something even more freaky about it. There was a shadow behind it.

A shadow of a body. A dead one.

It was my mom's body. Blood dripped from my neck. I turned around quickly and shot bullets.

I ran out of bullets fast and threw my magnum aside.

I ran outside the house and called for help. The street lamps were on.

It seemed like there was aliens here, cause of the lgihts and the

complete darkness. I was holding my iphone close to me.

I don't know either to wait or call. My neighbor came outside with a flashlgiht.

"What the hell is going on," he said.

"There is a freakin killer inside my house," I said scared.

One of the street lamps went off.

"He's here," someone said.

It was a creepy voice. Almost like a summoning.

My neighbor fell down dead. I didn't know how.

Suddenly, I felt something. Like knives were in my stomach.

Next thing I know I'm on the floor nearly dead.

The thing that almost klled me got away.

I was in a hospital for a whole weak.

I was watching the news.

There was mysterious deaths and kidnappings.

And I knew why.

This is just a myth. a urban legend. No one really knows about it.

But i do. Careful wen at midnight. Don't go in the bathroom and look at the mirror. Creepy things happen.

And don't light candles when it's pitch black.


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Comments:

ahhh, now i'm gona have to look! shit, eric! haha! great job though. I'm always ready to comment ur work!

L ♥

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

awesome. so... i'm glad u like it? hehe

AHHH this scared the f@#!ing shit out of me. i love it though and now i have to look. love it

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

lol. it scares everyone. good luck.

>>"" Where did you get this insperation from? >>"""""

'is creeped out because things are staring at her'

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Wha? I don't get it. lol.

speechless.......now I'm going to have to get rid of all the candles in my house as well as not going into the bathroom at night. God job, you've made me scared witless.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

really? awesome. it was just some idea i made up. i hope ur alright. its just a story dont worry. i hope. im just folling around. seriously dont worry. :)

creepyy
yet extremely awesome.
I loved how you formated it and everything
I love it
:]

Posted: Jul 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah it is creepy and yes the format was awesome! XD


Oooooo.. Creepy.. -shifty eyes-
That was really cool. ^-^
I quite liked it. Scary and awesome.
I also liked the format. Very cooool.
Keep it up.

~Megan

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

SweeT! Im glad u liked it and u should try my other awesome stories. hahaha!

:( It's too bad I like puppets. (And the song) LOL.
It was good but it takes a lot more to scare me. It almost reminds me of dead slience, except the puppet kills you if you scream. :)
GOOD though.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

lolz thanks. i like puppets too!!!! XD but im glad u like it?

Lol.Cool story a bit Aaaaa!lol...jk...Hmm good imagination.Niceee!
:)

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU! *takes a bow* im glad its a bit AAAAAAAAAA!

Wow this scared me! It makes it so tempting to look in the mirror lol
i must try it :D
great job!
please do cheak out my novels too :)

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

mmk. ill check em out some time!



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