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There are monsters behind every door.
The doors to my mind are six-inch thick reinforced steel.
Dare to enter the dark...?
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Submitted: Mar 4, 2008 Reads: 70 Comments: 6 Likes: 3
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oo haunting and ghostily and fresh. i like it! there this creepy tone to it. and since i could clearly paint the picture in my head as you were describing it, i got chills. nicely done.
Posted: Mar 4, 2008
Chilling...
Good description...
You set the mood just right
Posted: Mar 4, 2008
Brilliant, I loved the end it was very haunting. Nice job! ~ nixie
Posted: Mar 4, 2008
Great, i could picture it all and i swear i could smell blood while reading it.
Posted: Mar 26, 2008
wow, this is really good. although it's violently described, i like it, i could really imagine it. it was sooo amazing-- just like you.
Posted: Mar 29, 2008
That was amazing. The imagery you painted was stunning. I could see it very clearly in my mind.
This piece was very chilling, down right to the core. The atmosphere you set was perfect, and sent shivers up my spine.
Very good work.
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
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