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On Sadie and Adam's three year anniversary everything goes wrong.


Submitted:Apr 2, 2009    Reads: 160    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


"Adam?...Adam?" Sadie yelled for her boyfriend. They had decided to meet at an old abandoned cabin out in the woods. They had been together for three years now, to the date. when Sadie arrived, she noticed Adam's car wasn't there, so she decided to get things ready for tonight. "This is is!" she nearly squealed to herself as she laid a few blankets on a forgotton mattress that was left behind after the previous owners left. She reached over to grab a few pillows when she felt someone watching her. Sadie turned around and saw........... nothing but a harmless kitten. She giggled a little "you scared me kitty... pst...pst...pst...here kitty kitty kitty." The kitten started her way when when someone came up behind her and grabed her. Sadie screamed "LET ME GO! LET ME GO!" The person who grabed her imeadately let her go "calm down Sadie. Its just me" Adam said. She turned around and grabed him "oh my god! I was so scared I thought you... you were someone else. I thought you were gonna...gonna... kill me" she mannaged to choke out in between sobs. Adam pulled her closer "shhhhhh..... no one is going to get you i won't let them i promise." They sat on the bed for a while and then Sadie got up and turnd a stereo on. "It was too quiet." She walked back over to the bed and sat back down. Adam pulled her closer and kissed her. Slowly clothes began to pile on the floor and Adam pulled out a condom, he looks at Sadie with concerned eyes "Are you sure your ready for this Sadie?" He was so worried about hurting her. She smiled up at him and rested a hand on his face "I am, I want you to have my virginity." They looked into each others eyes as he lowered himself into her. When they finished they laid there breathing hard she turned into him resting a hand on his chest as she looked up into his eyes "I love you." she said and he smiled down at her "me to, I love you too babe" They kissed. Adam checked his phone and noticed the time and sighed " we gotta go. Your gonna be late for your curfew." They got up and got dressed. They began to leave when they suddenly here footsteps that dont belong to them, Sadie turned to Adam with her mouth open, Adam just stood there with a single finger over his mouth, telling her to be quiet. They were walking to the front door when a tall, gorey man steped it their way. Sadie let out a blood-curtling scream and Adam pushed her behind him and pointed  at a window and wispered " when i say run and get out of here! understand?" Sadie couldn't make herself speak so she nodded her head. Adam started backing up pushing her along with him. When there was a clear shot to the window he screamed "NOW!" They both ran towards the window. Once Sadie made it to the windowshe turned around to see where Adam was, she screamed "ADAM!" when she saw the man had a knife held to Adams throat. Adam struggled to get away but not get cut in the process but, stopped when Sadie screamed and he focused his attention on her "Sadie run! just go!." She climbed out the window and ran to her car and began searching for the pepper spray her dad gave her when she started her job at a laundry mat on the bad side of town. When she found it she almost cried with relief, but she had to save Adam. She ran back in the cabin and saw Adam ............... pull a knife out of his jeans pocket, he turned and shoved it into the attackers stomach. The man let out a horrible scream. Adam smiled a little relieved to be alive "you like the knife my daddy gave me for my birthday?" he pulled the knife out with a grunt and the man crumpled to the floor. Sadie sighed " oh Adam" she ran to him and they kissed passionatly. she huged him and he kissed the top of her head "I told you I wouldn't let anyone get you." The man stood silently behind them.

This is my first short story so tell me what you think please and thank you!!!!!





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