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Personal Justice 2 - Payback's A Bitch

Short story By: Michael68

Nate believed that stalking and pressuring a woman to go out with him would never hurt him in the end. That was until he met a woman who would change all that. Part 2 of the origninal story "Personal Justice".

Submitted:Jun 28, 2010    Reads: 121    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

The only thing that Nathaniel Wong Loi Sing could think about was Rebecca and the longing he had for her. How he wished he could know what it would feel like to have sex with her. Her naked body pressed against his, feeling her breasts crushed against his chest, as she let him fulfill every lustful fantasy that he had about her. Yet, she always pushed him away when he would even just try to put his arm around her. One time he had been able to fondle her breasts in the dark parking lot of the ice cream parlor one night. But after that, she never wanted to even talk to him. Every time he would call her, test her and even go over to her house, she would avoid him. To any other man, they would have gotten the hint that she wasn't interested and moved on. But Nate was convinced that he would be able to wear her down. That she would give into him, or realize that she truly did have feelings for him. It had gotten to the point where he had broken up with his girlfriend on purpose, thinking that she would come to him. For all the other times she pushed him away, she had always said that he was involved with her. And Nate would reply that she didn't satisfy him anymore and was looking for someone who would. Which of course, was a hint that he wanted her to be that someone. The only thing that he didn't seem to think about was if someone would find out about what he was doing. For he was studying to be a doctor, and what female patient would want to go to him, knowing that he had molested a woman in his past? And in the small unincorporated town of Mokena, everyone had a way of finding out what someone was up to. But that didn't matter to him. The only thing that did was Rebecca and how he was going to win her over. For she had been the only one that never made fun of his low voice, which others always would laugh and say that it sounded like batman the movie, The Dark Knight. But not Rebecca, she was the only one, except for his girlfriend that was.
That was why he went to the community gym that night, for he knew that she was there with some of her friends. But when he got there, he had seen her in the arms of another man. Probably the boyfriend that she always said that she had, that he never believed was true. But there they were, and there was nothing that he could do about it. That was when he met her. A woman with long fiery red hair and green eyes enchanted him. Along with the sultry frame of her body that any twenty-two year old man always dreamed of meeting. She had talked to him for a while, mostly about him and before he knew what was happening, he was walking out with her. In a way he figured that maybe Rebecca would see him with her and be jealous. Even though in the back of his mind he knew that wasn't true. They their way over to a black sedan and before they got in the woman turned to him. Her arms wrapped around him, making him feel her beasts crushed against his chest, as she kissed him passionately. Nate had no idea what to do, for he had never really had any experience with a woman before. Even with his girlfriend the only thing that they had done was kiss, but not like this. When she tilted her head slightly back, she looked at him with a devilish grin on her lips.
"You never done anything like this before, have you?" she said in a seductive tone.
"No." he replied slightly embarrassed.
"That's ok. I am going to teach you everything that you need to now about making love. Everything that you have ever fantasized of doing I will make come true." she said as her hand touched the side of his face gently.
"Why are you doing this? I hardly know you?" he asked.
"I will tell you that later. For now, lets just go and I will make you experience something so wonderful that you have never experienced before in your life." she said as she turned and made her way to the driver's door.
Nate didn't think twice, for this was like a dream come true for him. And if he were to reject her, he knew that he would regret it for the rest of his life.
They got into the car and drove off. He had no idea where she was taking him, but the lustful thoughts that started to run through his mind made it impossible for him to even concentrate on the danger that he might be in. All that he could think about was of what she was going to teach him. Without him even knowing it, he was telling this woman everything about Rebecca, even what he had done to try and gain her attention. The woman didn't seem to react to it, even when he had explained about him molesting her. He thought that he had seen her cringe a little, but wasn't sure. But to Nate, it really didn't matter what she thought. He knew that this woman was nothing more than a whore, for what woman would pick up a guy when she didn't even know them. Of course, what guy would go with a woman that he didn't know either. Jumping into her car and letting her drive him to Lord knows where? Of course Nate didn't think about that. His lust filled mind could only concentrate on was what he wanted to do to Rebecca and now to this woman as well.
His eyes studied her body as she drove, seeming to perfect to be true. She had told him that her name was Kathryn and that she had been looking for a man just like him. Nate didn't know really what to say, for he never thought that he would hear a woman tell him that. Of course, he hoped that it would have been Rebecca who would tell him that. But seeing her with her boyfriend made him realize that was something that would never happen. But maybe she saw him leave with Kathryn and would be jealous. Him actually leaving with an older woman. Or maybe she saw them in the parking lot kissing the way they did, before they drove off together. He knew that he had to get Rebecca out of his mind for the moment, for he was with a woman who was beautiful and made it obvious that she wanted him. His eyes continued to stare at her, knowing that she would be the one that would teach him to be a man. As he watched her, Nate was enchanted by her. The way her summer dress hugged every curve of her body so perfectly. And even the way the breeze from the opened driver's window lifted the bottom of her skirt, revealing a brief view of the black g-string that she wore underneath and how she didn't seem to give it any notice. It was obvious that this woman was trying to seduce him and Nate was falling for it.
A short while later, the woman pulled to the side of an old dirt road, by the edge of a forest. Nate had no idea where they were, but it really didn't matter to him right now. For he was with a beautiful woman who wanted him and was willing to fulfill all the fantasies that his perverted mind had. She turned to him and then told him to get out. When he asked why, she replied that they were going into the forest. That was where she wanted to bring him, to show him what surprises she had in store for him. Without thinking Nate got out of the car just as she did and willingly followed her into the forest. The dark shadows surrounded them and made it almost difficult for him to even see her. But he could feel her holding his hand as she guided him. They had only walked for a few minutes, till they reached a large tree with a look out shack high up in it. He had heard about this place, for it was where a lot of the teenagers had went to drink and make-out, away from the eyes of the adults. Nate never thought that he would be there with Kathryn now. For she seemed to be the type who would have taken him to some cheap motel instead. Which was the one thing that he feared, after hearing about the man who was murdered in the old Heaven's View Motel. But he figured that was something that he didn't need to worry about any more. She turned to him and told him to start climbing, saying that was where she wanted to take him. Nate just smiled and then started to climb up the wooden steps that were nailed to the side of the tree.
Later Nate sat on the cold hard wood floor staring up at her as she slowly took her summer dress off. Revealing the sultry curves of her skin, the skimpy black g-string that he had only had a glimpse of earlier, and her firm, well rounded breasts that were not covered by a bra. She stood there for a moment, her hands on her hips, lets slightly parted as she grinned at him. The glow from the oil lantern they found in there glows softly on her tanned skin, and revealed an old army cot and three other bottle of oil that some hunter had left there.
"You like what you see?" Kathryn asked in a playful voice.
"Oh yes, I really do." he replied trying to catch his breath.
How could he really deny the fact that he did when he could feel his manhood harden and throb against the crotch of his jeans. A couple beads of sweat rolled down his forehead as he felt himself becoming nervous because he was not sure what he was suppose to do. Instantly he stood up and stepped to her, as his eyes studied every inch of her sultry body as a childish grin appeared on his lips. Before he could say a word, her hands reached out and started taking off his clothes in a forceful manor. The sound of it ripping and the sudden maddening expression on her face scared him more than he had ever been scared before. The only thing that he could do was to stand there paralyzed in fear, not knowing what it was that he was suppose to do.
"What are you doing? Why are you being so rough?" he asked in a frightened tone.
"Just giving you a taste of what you were doing to that woman that you are obsessed with. The only thing is that I am taking it to a higher level." she said.
"How do you know about Rebecca? How do you know about what I think or want?" he asked in a scared voice.
"Everyone knows about what you feel about that woman….about what you want….and how she doesn't want you at all." she said. "But I am going to give you what you have wanted to do with her. Only think is that I am in control….not you."
Nate didn't say anything as she unfastened his pants and then forcefully pulled them and his underwear down with one motion. When she did, he gasped for a moment and then his body started to shake. Then she ordered him to lie down on the floor. As he did, she slowly moved to the side of him, her hips swaying slightly seductively as her arms crossed over her chest. He looked up at her with a worried expression, not knowing what she was going to do to him. She stood over him with her legs on either side of his body as she continued to look down at him. Then lowered herself down onto his crotch, grinding against the shaft of his hard member as the friction between them started to make him moan. She could tell that he longed to have himself inside of her and yet seemed to afraid to speak up about it. He slowly sat up, his hands reaching out and touching her breasts, fingers lightly stroking her hard nipples. Instantly she pushed him away as she showed him such a shocked expression.
"No….this will not do. I am going to have to do something about this." she said as she pushed him away.
"What do you mean by that?" he asked.
"I will show you. Do you want me to? I know that it is going to be something that you will never forget." she replied smiling so playfully.
She reached over for her purse that she had set down by the side of them, picked it up and then got to her feet. It was then that she ordered him to stand up, her eyes suddenly showing a glare of rage within them. Nate didn't know what she would do if he didn't follow what she was demanding. Slowly, he got to his feet as his eyes stayed on her. He started to wonder if he had made a wrong decision to go with this woman, to listen to his lustful desires, rather than his own intellect.
"What are you going to do to me?" he asked in a somewhat frightened tone as he stood naked in front of her.
"You will see. I think that you need something that will really get you excited. Something that you never dreamed of that will turn us both on." she replied and then hesitated for a moment. "Turn around and don't ask any more questions."
He did as she told him. Partly because whatever the surprise was that she was going to do excited him and partly because he was starting to fear her. In his mind the only way that he would be able to get away from her would be to do what she said. Even though it made him feel vulnerable and helpless. Little did he know that he would never leave these woods again.
He felt her grab his wrist and bring his arm in back of him, and then did the same with the other. Cold metal chilled the skin of his wrists as he heard a clicking sound and then the cold metal pressing hard against him. Nate wanted to turn around and tell her to let him go, that he didn't want to do this anymore. But before he could she had blind folded him, and then he felt her fingers moving over his shoulders and then around and down his chest.
"So Nathanial, you like to harass a woman into doing what you want? I saw the way that you were looking at that brunette back at the gym. Was she the one that you are stalking, harassing, hoping to get the chance to have her do what you want?" she said in a suddenly wicked voice.
"I….I don't know what you are talking about." he replied.
"Yes you do. Shame on you for trying to lie to me. You probably want her so bad that you would be willing to do anything to win her over." she said.
He could feel her fingers continuing to move up and down his chest, each time pressing even harder. Her nails cutting deeper into his skin. Nate had to think of something to make her stop. For this was nothing that he had expected, unless this was her sick and demented idea of foreplay.
"Why are we talking about her? I thought you brought me here for some other reason? You know….to teach me how to please a woman." he said in a somewhat calm voice.
"Oh I will. I will give you everything that you deserve. That is everything that I want to give you. I am not some innocent girl that you can push around like the others in this town. But I do promise you, I will give you something that you will never forget." she whispered as she leaned over to his right ear.
He could feel her hands moving down his body again, and then touching his manhood. She knelt before him, her hand lightly stroking his shaft as she looked up to see the expression on his face. She knew that he had an idea of what he wanted her to do to him, but she wouldn't. For she had her own plans for him that she would soon reveal.
Nate could feel the pressure building up within him and all that it seemed that she was doing was manipulating him with her hand. Was this the extent to what she had planned for him? Before he could say anything of the disappointment that he was feeling, there was a strange sensation that suddenly came to him. Something that felt like metal again, but this time it was scratching across his chest. Or at least he thought that was what it was. At first, it was too light for him to really tell what it could be. But just from the feel of it, made him want to step back in fear. When he tried, he found that he couldn't move his legs, as if they had been tied together.
"What the hell are you doing to me, you crazy bitch!" he yelled.
There was a moment of silence as he could hear the sound of her breathing becoming deeper. And then felt the back of her hand strike the side of his face. Knocked his head to turn to his right suddenly as he felt something warm running down his chin from his mouth. Blood.
"Now, that isn't something that a good Christian boy should be saying. Shame on you." her voice hissed wickedly.
"I never said that I was a good Christian boy to begin with. If I was do you think that I would be hear with you?" he replied as he spat some blood out of his mouth.
"Yes I do, because you are always the same. No matter who the man is, they always believe they can be so good around everyone and then have the chance to do something wicked to a woman and get away with it. Well, this time you are not going to be able to do that." she said.
It was then that he felt something wrap around his neck and then tighten. The rough surface of it cutting into the skin of his neck as he gasped suddenly. Nate wanted to call her a crazy bitch, a psycho, a whore, but in the end….he just remained silent. Knowing that would not save him from whatever fate Kathryn had for him. It was then that he felt something cold and wet being poured on his naked body, which made him shiver even more in fear. A tear came out from the blindfold and down his cheek, as he tried to find the words to say. How he wanted to tell her that he learned his lesson. That he would never bother Rebecca or any other woman again. Yet, if he did, Nate had a feeling that it would not make any difference.
"Why are you doing this to me? What have I done to you?" he cried.
"You are just like all the other jerks in this world. Thinking that a good looking woman is yours for the taking. And when they say no, you ignore it and keep going. Taking advantage of them just so you can get what you want." Kathryn said in rage as the blade of the knife cut deep into his abdomen. "Thinking women are nothing more than some sore of sex object for your amusement."
"No! No, I don't think that at all. You don't understand what I feel for her." he said.
Nate could feel his legs wanting to give out on him, but he fought to keep himself standing. As he did, he wondered if what she said was true. If that was the way that he made himself look like, when he tried to be with Rebecca? A question which he knew he would never find the truth to.
Kathryn walked back to her purse and pulled out a Zippo lighter, holding it in one hand while still gripping the hunting knife she brought it the other. His blood dripping down its sharp edge and onto the wooden floor. Her eyes filled with maddening rage as she moved to Nate once again.
"Now you are going to have to pay for what you have done. And there is nothing that you can say that will save you from your punishment." she said.
Officer Mark Jackson had gotten the call of an arson fire out in the Triton Woods. Normally it would have been something that he would have passed it off to the fire department. But that was until he heard the report that they had found a body there. As he made his way through the darkened woods, the rank odor of burning flesh filled the air, to the point that he thought he was going to be sick. But it wasn't the smell that made him feel that way, it was the thought that this could be what he feared. Officer Terra Cassas followed next to him, neither of them saying a word. Yet, they didn't have to, for they both were thinking the same thing. Scared to discover what it could be that they thought it could be. When they got there, the fire department hadn't shown up yet, and all they could see was a burning body hanging from a noose outside the hunting shack in the tree. The glow from the flames illuminated the area, letting them see the wall of the shack and what was written on it. It wasn't the word guilty, like had been carved into the body of the victim at the old Heaven's View Motel, a couple days ago.No, this time, written in the victim's blood was not done yet.
"Jesus, what is goingon around here? First that one at the abandoned motel and now this? What in the hell are we dealing with?" Terra Cassas asked in terror.
"I don't know. But you better call this in so the fire can be contained before it spread through the rest of the forest." Johnson said in an almost lifeless tone.
"Mark, do you think that this was the same one from a couple days ago? Even though it is a different type of murder." she asked.
"I don't…..yeah, I know it is. Whoever it is, isn't finished either. We have to find out what is going on and who this person is. Before we end up with a town filled with dead bodies." he said and then thought. "I only hope that we can before it is too late."


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