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Drop-Dead Gorgeous

Book By: arogersms

A girl decides to get a makeover and now all the totally hot guys are all over her

Submitted:Oct 14, 2008    Reads: 132    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   

Elsie was a nerd with the glasses, pocket protector, and everything. None of the guys or the girls treated her like she was anything. She was invisible to all and heard none at all. She was never asked to a dance, so she never went. She made friends to no one, but the books. All the people in her high school class were dumber than a door knob. But she was the one with the brains. One day she got tired of it. Her mom thought she would rebel. She had never been like this before! She hollered and yelled and got down on knees to beg her poor, old mother to take her to the mall. She cried, "I want a makeover, and I want it now!" Her mother thought she would burst. 'Does she know how low the economy is? Does she know how much that will cost? Probably hundreds maybe even thousands! How does she think we will pay for all of this?!' Then the next day they went to the mall and they saw a sign: "WIN A COMPLETE MAKEOVER WITH DEMI LOVATO AND ALL FOR NO CHARGE!!!!!" So they decided to check it out and sign up. The lady that was at the sign-up table said the winner would be announced later in the day. While they were waiting, Elsie got hungry, so her mom took her to the food court.


Elsie was eating her food when the winner was announced. ".....And the contest winner is......ELSIE DILLON BLACK!!!" She nearly spit her food across the table, right on to her mom's lap! "Oh my God!!! I won mom! I won!" She squealed as she dashed towards the table to collect her prize. What she didn't know is that there would be a twist to the rules that she would never suspect. (if you have any suggestions on what should happen next, feel free to leave it on the comments)


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