I'm not finished with this story yet (no where near finishing actually) but I would really love some intro feedback on whether or not I should keep writing and where the readers would like to see it head to. Thanks a TON!
Frog Boy's Origin, The classic tale of the teenage superhero done in a brand new way! A gift from his friend Plug gives Our hero Mike Wornhouse many different abilities and gadgets, he decides he should use he's powers for good and become protector of his home town: Bensworth! This may sound like...
The lost Mind of Buffalo Morgan is old and new material taken from Mr. Hemmerleâ€™s shows and woven into a powerhouse of hardcore comedy. Thereâ€™s comedy everywhere in life and this novel will exploit that as a fact. From â€œLetâ€™s bolt a cannon to the hood of my car" to "The...
| Updated Sep 14, 2012
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All her life, Carol Reston has wanted to be a published author. Sheâ€™s looking for a dynamite idea for a novel that will sell when her husband, David suggests she look into a series of women missing from their small town of Oakdale, a suburb of San Diego. Carol decides to inve...
O.K. so here's the details. Book: New Moon; twilight saga #2
Author: Stephanie Meyer. Alright so we got some problems with the vampires, wolves, and relationship trouble. Here are some situations Bella gets in and what I would do if it were me. Basically this is what I would do in her shoes. You ...
Hmmm... ever read twilight (sorry the first page) and go 'Where the hell is the plot?' or better yet 'Yawn she'll end up with him and be a vampire' just by reading the first line?
And then you have to put up the with thousands or thousands of pages describing him as a 'stone, marble god'?
| Updated Aug 28, 2009
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