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Analogy the collected edition

Novel By: callum herbert

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Submitted:Oct 21, 2013    Reads: 0    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

TIMESLIDE: One year later.

So after that appalling event at the special school i left and went to live with my mother in her new house. We were rather happy in the new house i had my cat called Obadiah and two new fishes called Wanda and Pietro they were happy also.(I named them after the marvel people).

All was okay until the new next door man and woman moved in they had rock music and dogs and other weapons of torture just to upset me. In fact i called the chief of the UN to ask if he may aid me in getting rid of this threat. It never works.

I wrote a letter to future me and asked if i could travel back in time and help..... no reply. So this horror continued for many days until i decided to do something. I called my old comrade harper with no surname and my other friend Mr the bus driver and they said i should phone the council and so i did and to my genuine surprise SOMETHING WENT RIGHT FOR ONCE!

The next door people had to move out due to many complaints and i was happy. Until my father's funeral i never found the time to say, after my crazy thoughts my father got in his car and drove away, they found his body two days ago.

TIMESLIDE: two years later

Well here i am leaving into the big scary world. My belongings where moved into my new house by some men who i told exactly the specifications on their placement and still they got it wrong. I lived with harper with a surname it was sword swordthrow.

The end.


This story was my honest favourite to write, I really loved some of the dialogue of David and to be honest the character was based upon a combination of me and Sheldon Cooper from the TV series "The big bang theory" and the end product was David Spearhead.

I loved every minute of the story not just as the writer but I would consider myself a fan. I never planned for David to become gay but the whole idea came to me one evening when I was planning the final chapter of the story and I thought "hey that would be great" and I decided to add it in.

I also have a little treat for you: a mini story exclusive to this collected version, so here is Mr the bus driver


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