COMMENT QUEEN

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Poem By: bubbly
Humor

Tags: comment, queen, reader, writer, fans, compete, mutual

This poem is dedicated to DONNA. She provided the food for fodder. And here it is. Rightly, she is the COMMENT QUEEN. Yahoo! View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 10, 2008 Reads: 403 Comments: 199 Likes: 58

Hi! I am new to Booksie and I am ALENE

This is the best of all sites I have ever BEEN

So pure, so good, yet so fresh and so CLEAN

I am free to comment without curbs of a DEAN

Let me tell you, I am only EIGHTEEN

I would ever write - I had never FORESEEN

But I am creative - writing is in my GENE(S)

Anything from horses to HALLOWEEN

Just now, I received a request from IRENE

“Please comment on my poem called JEAN(S)”

My first request and I am very KEEN

My comment should not be anywhere LEAN

It should steer clear of being MEAN

Irene says, she has just turned NINETEEN

And gets many comments – good to OBSCENE

She likes to dress well but only to PREEN

She thinks I am the best Comment QUEEN

So I am glad to follow the ROUTINE

And join the fun on the commenting SCENE

I have come across all – old, mids and TEEN(S)

And now I receive requests UMPTEEN

All laced with sugar and also VELVETEEN

Writer is dead, reader is thriving – I WEEN

Alas, my brain is numb from xylem to XENE

And it seems just like YESTREEN

When I wanted to write from zinc to ZENE!!!

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Comments:

xxemoxbfsxx

hah. very cool and creative. i like the idea of it. great job. ^_^

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lydia. thanx for a wonderful comment. i'm jumping with joy (don't tell it to anybody for only u can make me do it - JUMP. oh! i've hit the roof!) and...care to complete! ;-)

AngelaSteele

HAHA. lol. Those must have been very difficult words to rhyme. Yet, you managed it and did an excellent job. :)

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! angela. thanx for a lovely comment. for a friend, i can "harass" myself a little. pleasure is all mine. ;-)

Stephanee

hahahaha the rhymes were a lot of fun, I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Stephanee :)

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! stephanee. thanx for enjoying it. i'm honored to see u enjoying it. ;-)

Pratibha

So usual and creative....

Really enjoyed it.....lovely....

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! pratibha. thanx for a creative comment. it makes my day. ;-)

Orange Fay

Wow! This is a great and creative poem, Bubbly..
I like the end wit 'EN'...U r amazing!n_n

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! orange. thanx for finding it creative. luv ya. ;-)

DarkFairy8907

Very creative.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! df. thanx for calling this poem creative. the effort has paid off. ;-)

Hellow Bubbles. Oh me God. I send the blog describing my situation and you turned it into a poem. AND I AM COMMENTING ON MY OWN SITUATION! I've nowhere to hide. I... The fact is. I love it. No one has written anything about me. A heartfelt thanx. I'm too filled with emotions to comment properly. Give me some time or I'll faint. (Just joking.) I...I... Don't ask me anything else or else. You are making a kid act more kiddish.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! donna. u don't need to write so much. a single word "thanx" is sufficient. u've worked too hard. just relax and rest. i know ur situation. take care. ;-)

Nita Eads

Cute

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! nita. thanx for a cute comment. ;-)

indiefreak

As usual... creative and fresh and enjoyable *clap clap*

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! if. thanx for enjoying it. take care. ;-)

LeAnne

How could you think of so many rhyming words???!!!
I'm completely speechless!!

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! leanne. thanx for liking it. kindergarten kids were helping me and i can see, they did an excellent job. next time, i'll give them credit. ha! haa!! haaa!!! ;-)

StrictlyVee

Bubbly, I have to say, that was so cute.. I love the way you finished each line.

P.S. I'm sending you one of my most precious gifts.. A special smile from my V-smile vault. :) hope you can use it.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! vee. thanking u sounds small. for ur one SMILE, i can write a 1000 poems. thanx for such a precious gift. i'll cherish it forever. luv ya. ;-)

saif wasiullah

This is the best birthday gift Donna will ever get. And if she's left speechless, I can imagine. She is creating a storm on my writers' forum. And here you are encouraging her! I can never understand females. Too complex. And if I say any more, she'll come chasing me. I better run.

PS: I wish I was in Donna's shoes. A lovely poem with a friendly sentiment. Could you focus your spotlight on me a little. I'd be grateful. Donna. You are one helluva damn lucky girl. If you were not born, then I'll be lucky. But it is not in my fate.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! saif. u always seem to rib donna. why can't u two be at peace. u don't need to understand us for i'm trying to decipher u! RUN anywhere and v'll find u, no matter where u r in the world or on moon. and donna'll out run u at any given time. wanna bet! she's already started running... ;-)

listener

Bubbly. You are the rhyming queen. Perfect rhyme, perfect meaning. A smile on my lips and a cheer in my heart. Long live Donna. And three cheers to you. God bless you, my girl.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! listener. thanx for taking time out of ur busy schedule. i'm indeed grateful. please don't make me arrogant. u r 2 good for my ego. (now-a-days it's kaput.) donna is the madonna of the hour. ;-)

Prizemoney0135

LAL...Diz poem iz good. And nice how u made bout another Booksie person.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! thanx. some writers do make me humble. rest i'm a terror...i can't compliment myself any further or u'll fall in luv with me. (not exactly what the doctor ordered.) ha! haa!! haaa!!! ;-)

OHSHCKaori

Very unusual and creative. I like it!!
~Kaori

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kaori. ur cheerful comment uplifts my spirits. thanx. ;-)

lemonluv

haha, i liked it a lot. lovved the rhyming!!!!!

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lemon. thanx. i share ur craziness and when i go nuts... don't ask. ;-)

DeadMemory

I like =D

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! josh. thanx for liking it. ;-)

findingmyway

This is so fun to read - I love it!

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! f. thanx for loving the poem and finding it funny. ;-)

dom22

heya bubbly. i liked it..... I found the poem funny in parts... I could imagine a teenage girl telling this to one of her friends or infront of a classroom... with her hands on her hips and her head slightly tilted.... nice one...

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! dom. "funny in parts!" u break my heart. where is this classroom, where is this girl, where is dom. "writer has come alive". thanx for arousing my consciousness. ;-)

V2K

Cute one!! I liked it a lot.. :)

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! v2k. thanx for liking it. ;-)

Urja

ROCKING! It can even be put to a dance!

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! urja. so which one'd u prefer - a saturday night fever or a thriller, a dirty dancing or... the choice is urs. and i'll shake a leg along with u. let's 've a go. ;-)

Jhec Consolacion

oh what a nice poem ladies and gentleMEEN...hehehe good work bubbly..:)

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jhec-ene. thanx. ur wit is apparent. and it has stolen my heart. and i don't mind my heart being stolen again and again and... (stop it! will ya!). see, donna is asking me to stop. could u give her a piece of ur mind. ;-)

WhoSpokeSilence

Very nice :D I really enjoyed it.
I can't remember the last time I even wrote a happy snappy poem :) :P
x

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! w. thanx. ur enjoument makes my day complete. luv ya. ;-)

madonnafan7
(not registered user)

Creative. Nice job. :)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! madonna. thanx. so u r already (ma)donna's fan. no wonder, u feel i did a good job. ;-)

Azmat Shah

hello Bubbly,
i liked ur poem. Just imagine rhyming that many verses with "een", gr8 job. Since this is a poem dedicated to a friend i'll stop myself before i transform into a critic lol. Donna is one lucky girl!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! azmat. thanx for a thoughtful comment but i want that critical part. for that is the best of all. don't deny me the read. Donna is awesome. ;-)

rose89

this is good! ;)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! rose. thanx for a wonderful comment. ;-)

craaig

A Fun poem. Looks like you challenged yourself to use every rhyming word in the dictionary.
craaig

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! craaig. thanx. this keeps the heart in good shape and kicks the mind. take care. ;-)

kezacoop

Very creative

The Rhyming worked well

Kudos and Kisses

For Bubbly our girl

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kezacoop. thanx. ur kudos works well (both for my brain and heart). and i return the kisses along with my love. ;-)

wikhaiinn

Playful on the rhyme

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! wikhaiinn. thanx for a lovely comment. ;-)

Susan Hartline Fouts

Bubbly, you are too much. Doing all those reviews and still finding the inspiration to write. Girl I have got to hand it to you you are just too too much. Good poem and so cute.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! susan. reading ur comment, makes me think, i've written a good poem. the effort has paid off. it is a simple poem. readers like u add a star to it. luv ya. ;-)

whitehart

This is amazing! A totally cute piece. Love it

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! deb. writers like u continue to inspire and enc encourage me. thnax for showering the love. ;-)

Jak Sylvian

LOVE all the permitations of -ean,-ene -een, that was some effort and definitely worth slapping an "I like it".

Back to the land of "serene" for me. ;-)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jak. jak-ene. from the land of oo la la to serene is one riot of a journey. take care. thanx for a lovely comment. ;-)

JoshuaBusch

Humor is the way to go. I think all writing should have some of it in there somewhere : )

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! josh. thnax. humor keeps the doctor away and makes the world go round. this poem is what the doctor prescribed. so have a go at it once a minute/second. let me not proceed to nano-second or... ;-)

punne4e
(not registered user)

Hy!dear,superb,this type of writing only expact from you. Well i think you keep dictionary alongside with you when you wrote it......hahaha!! therefore EEn use mostly chime again and again.Your own writing was my wish that you fulfill very well.I can say God bless you forever.

Your brother-VICKY.PUNNE4E

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! vicky. ur comment tickles me no end. i'm the DICTIONARY. what a joke! have a good laugh and thanx for hearty wishes.
;-)

sorenangel1826

the sound "een" is like stuck in my head...D: XD nice job..:D

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! soren. thanx for taking the poem to ur head. but my dear, what about the heart. (silly me, looking for compliments). ha! haa!! haaa!!! ;-)

Ashleigh Butcher

This is so super fine!
And just so sublme!
I wish i could rhyme...
Oh well, maybe next time.

Haha. I loved it bubbly---entertaining as ever. You are indeed the ''rhyme queen'- lovely!

Much love
Ash

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ash. thanx for findig it sublime. i wish u enjoy everything u do in ur life. lol. ;-)

AllyDee

amazingg poem!
i reallyyy liked it

:]

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ally. thanx for liking it. ;-)

IcyDibs402

Wow! You kept me on my toes!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! dibs. thanx for such a fast-track comment. get set go. ;-)

MTCuzino

That was creative. No wonder you have such a good following

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! mt. thanx for liking it. ;-)

Kritika

absolutely wonderful...............and seriously plzz tell me how the heck did u find so many words that rhyme!!??

but seriously..........i LOVED it

:D

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kritika. when i wrote it, i was trying to cheer a friend. i wanted to fit in the story and by god's grace it jammed in well. thanx for liking it. lol. ;-)

Wandiola

Very fun and BUBBLY!!!! XD loved it!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! wandiola. thanx for a warm and bubbling comment. lol. ;-)

Olola

You are talented Bubbly. I mean I could never do what you do...you are so creative and you can write about anything. You also made the lines rhyme in such a way that you adapted the words to your poem and still we understand what they 'MEAN'. lol. I'm looking forward to seeing what you cannot write about. Donna should be very proud and extremely honoured to be written about by such a terrific writer.

Keep up the great work!

Olola.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! olola. thanx. could u find from donna what she thinks. for earlier, she had called me quite a few things in her emails (i don't want to repeat them here for her secrets'll be out and then u never know with her.) lol. ;-)

gerabel

Totally original and unique!!
Cheers.....Jerry

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jerry. thanx for calling it unique. thanx again. ;-)

lexie

always some thing funny!!! bubbly you out did yourself, how do u come up with these funny things!? :) i love love it. so good.
all the best lexie

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lexie. once earlier, i wrote a rhyming poem on bullying but that didn't turn out well at all. and that regret i wanted to set right. and ur liking this one makes me feel, i did do something. thanx a lot. ;-)

dom22

Bubbly :) didn't want to break your heart hun.... i've got a vivid imagination and that's the images that popped into my head.... LOL it really did made me laugh. I just read it again. And for real gf how much time did you spend getting all those word to rhyme... You did a good job.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! dom. no, no. i was just trying to sound upset with u.

the only difficulty i found was in fitting the story with 26 rhyming words. finally something did come up. all done in shower. (shower has turned into a thinker's room!) my mom wonders why i spend so much time there. (now u know!) ;-)

saratopia

cool, creative. I liked it.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! sarah. thanx for a lovely comment. ;-)

GiGi Joy

XD
that's so creative

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! gigi. thanx for liking it. u r a dear. lol. ;-)

thebrokenhearteddontsleep

...
Hahahahaha!! I like it.
Really creative. ^-^
Nice job. XD

~!~Megan~!~

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! megan. thanx for a lovely comment. the effort has paid off. ;-)

Pikaseel

Lol, that was pretty good. ^^ I like the made up word yestreen XD

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! pikaseel. thanx for liking the word yestreen. lol. ;-)

Aranel

Hey you wanted me to comment? So here I am! I'm sorry, before I start on it, I must make it clear that I give my honest opinions, and is not mant to be a personal attack if it sounds offensive. So don't get mad at me for my lack of courtesies, alright?

I feel that this poem is not creative. Say, I can do that kind of rhyming with just about any part of my life that I want to tell a story about, and indeed I have tons of them written when I was younger. But on the bright side, I suppose its good that this whole thing came out because of someone, and you mention it. Quite the poem to use if anyone wants to advertise Booksie too! ^^

Don't be angry, k? I only don't like it because I believe you can do better :)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! aranel. thanx. i wanted to write the poem with EARTH as donna has earthy quality but neither the story nor the rhyming fitted adequately. i tried 6 other words but couldn't find 26 letters. but with -ene it fitted perfectly and the story did develop.

but i'll thank you heartily if u'd help me out with Earth rhyming 26 words and also a story. i'm glad to find u here.

Pikaseel

Lol, that was pretty good. ^^ I like the made up word yestreen XD

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! pikaseel. thaanx for liking yestreen. lol. ;-)

Bradtruscott

hey

this is really good. Very creative and fresh. I envy people who can just write spontaniously :)

keep it up

~Brad

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! brad. thanx for finding it spontaneous. this is my true reward. ;-)

phyllz

that was good! i like it. very creative.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! phyllz. thanx for finding it creative. ;-)

jewelfish14

i love it its great, creative, fun, cute i love the ryming

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! j. thanx for liking it. ;-)

bilist

I don't usually read poems,
but I loved this one [:
It was like awesome lol

It was like... different. So it was like, fun [:

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! blist. thanx. i'm glad u liked it. ;-)

SimpleySplendiferous

I liked it awesome job :) can't wait to see what you come up with next :)

♥ Always & Forever ♥
~Ciara~

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ciara. thanx for liking the poem. it is a simple poem but readers like u make it sound great. ;-)

tintin

Hello Bubbly. You have created the niche. I liked the ironical humor - "the writer is dead" when Alene joined the site to be a WRITER. And "the reader is thriving". What a change for the sake of change. This one line tells all. The rhyming is incredible. That adds to the fun and creativity. After a long time, I feel I've found a poem worthy of my comment. Just to remind you, I had a hearty laugh reading your answers. You are a witty chick.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! tintin. thanx for finding me witty.

"I don't know the key to success but I know the key to failure is trying to please everybody." ;-)

KamiKaze no Onryou

Hahaha, oh Lord that was funny! I really liked the poem with rhymes, they must've been quite a pain to find the right word for it. I liked it! Great job!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kamikaze. thanx. now that pain has turned into pleasure. thanx again. ;-)

phantom

Write my dear, write. God has created you for writing. Could you highlight the line, writer is dead, reader is thriving. That's the bombshell. She wanted to write but she became a reader. Donna, I sympathise with you.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! phantom. thanx. i've highlighted the two lines. donna can use ur sympathy. (sob, sob). ;-)

brauweiler141

Nice use of the whole 'EEN' kind of theme. Definitly looking forward to new masterpeieces. Keep it up ;)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ericka. thanx for liking the rhyming. take care. ;-)

tin2twinkling

just like what nita said: cute =)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! t2t. thanx for finding it cute. ;-)

Ichi Clairvoyance

Wow. Anything I say will be repetitive, so I'll just stick with... it was well-written. ^^

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ichi. thanx a lot. u r a dear. ;-)

xXMusicXx

Great jod ^_^

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! music. thanx. i'm verse, u r music. let's dance. ;-)

Jbortti

Very good ! It so creative and great!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jbortti. thanx for liking the poem. ;-)

Dark Skylight

Haha,that was very very creative,and a bit funny poem,in good way.How can I say,it was really great,and it was i dont know how to describe it.It was written relaxed...?...Anyway,it wa really nice poem!:)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ds. thanx for pointing it out - it was written in a relaxed frame of mind. ;-)

AngelofTheNight

Hahahaha, cool poem, I like the rhyming. ^_^ Well done!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! angel. thanx for liking it. ;-)

rose1

So Booksie has made a reader out of a writer like Donna. Donna, enjoy the fun (readership) while it lasts. Writing is taxing. Reading is easy. Loved the poem very much. 1000 stars to you along with sun, moon and the sky.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! rose. that's the fate of donna. i can agree with u but donna doesn't. she loves to write. alas! ;-)

Lacey Cummings

Very cute Bubbly! Since Donna is your comment queen, perhaps that makes you the Rhyming Queen. :) Nice job!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lacey. thanx for finding it cute. those were donna's words and i'm no queen. pleeeeeeeeeeeez! ;-)

audreyhudson

Seems like a creative carnival here. Hope I am not too late. Original, spontaneous and hugely likeable.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! audi, thanx for calling it original and spontaneous. luv ya. ;-)

Into His Hands

wow very nice. I'm impressed that you made the last word of each sentence rhyme. Now that's what I call talent! Good job!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! i. thanx for finding it rhyming. and i'll reserve my comment on 'talent'. thanx again. ;-)

kevin smith

Ha ha. I like!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kevin. thanx for liking it. ;-)

Michael68

Excellent job my friend. You made me smile when I read this.:)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! mikey. thanx for liking and smiling. and keep smiling. ;-)

Pokojskixxx

very creative and unexpected

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! pokojski. thanx for a lovely comment. ;-)

CanadianIdiot

Clever. Since the ending words followed in alphabeticle order, it must've been tough to rhyme. Its clever, so I'll say its good. Rawk on.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ci. thanx for discovering the alphabetical order. now it doesn't seem tough. ;-)

BrookeSimon

Adorable! Loved it =D
-Brooke

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! brooke. thanx for a charming comment. ;-)

Blisteredsouls

Adored it! its very cute and clever i enjoyed the rhyming

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! b. thanx for finding it cute and clever. ;-)

BreakingDawn

wow great job! hee he. u have ALOT of comments! : D

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! bd. thanx for liking the poem. ;-)

Harlem Domingo

Hello bubbly...Very creative, especially the "zinc to ZENE!!!" ending. Be well.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! harlem. thanx for liking the ending. my effort has paid off. thanx again. ;-)

snowbelle

i loved it. great rhyming.
snow

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! snowbelle. thanx for liking it. ;-)

justonenight

BEST. POEM. EVER.
Ahaha, really! I love this- it's so amazing.. (:

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! j. thanx for liking it. ;-)

RxQueen

Great write, very creative and unique.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! r. thanx for finding it unique. take care. ;-)

Kred35

So creative Bubbly! I really great poem. So cool...
:)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kred. thanx for finding it creative. this makes my day.
;-)

Marga Manlapig

That was quite funny. I like the satirical way you write.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! marga. thanx for liking it. i'm glad. ;-)

toratoratora

I won't repeat what others have already said but you are the Pied Piper of Booksie. This poem has only increased my belief in what I had already read of your work. Keep up.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! tora. thanx. ur literary side is showing. thanx again. ;-)

Itania

Very nice. I like how everything ryhmes. It has a good structure and a very nice tempo. I like it!
~Justine
(I would appreciate a comment on my poem, Ribbons, if you would be so kind)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! itania. thanx for liking the rhyming scheme and the tempo. ;-)

xXcoldXheartedXworldXx

hahaha this is very good.
ur kindergartens did good ;)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! c. thanx. (but don't tell this to anyone. - this kindergarten exists in my mind alone.) and if it becomes real, i'll've to join it. ;-)

mum55

Just one word .....Superb......Til Later Juliet

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! juliet. thanx for finding it superb. thanx again. ;-)

SkarlettStone

Right to the end this poem keepe you moving, it's flowing captures and fassinates you.
I love it.
X_-

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! skarlett. thanx a lot for finding these qualities in the poem. i'm moved. ;-)

Alquimista

Very cheeky.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! alquimista. thanx for finding it cheeky. ;-)

air

Bubbly, I am number # 90 on this wagon ride Lol!
after all those comments I have to go all the way back up to the top to re read. hAhahHaaaHAHA
just kidding,
hey it was VERY, VERY cute!!!!!!!
keep spilling the goodness about ~katie ^_^

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! air. thanx. but u r not a number for me. ur comment is so cute and warm, i can escape the canadian chill. thanx for that. ;-)

angelgirl

Very nice, I really liked it, you have a great talent! Keep me posted please!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! angel. a huge thanx for liking it. ;-)

apodiform

Hehehe. I like it!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! emily. thanx for liking it. ;-)

PhoebeMiller

You made me laugh. Thank you. I love rhyming, especially for fun. :)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! phoebe. thanx. if u did laugh, my purpose was served. keep laughing. ;-)

Francheskalini

how very skilled you are in the art of rhyming. especially at the end there- those words are extremely unusual! two points! haha

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! franch. thanx. i'm still learning but u r an observant reader to appreciate them. ;-)

Reaper

lol, the best part is all those word are real! congrats on noty stooping to the level of using jebberish!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! reaper. thanx for a hearty comment. co-writers like u'll keep me afloat. thanx again. ;-)

Punishment

Good luck with all the response to the comments. Hahahaha! XD

very cute bubbly. ^^

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! punishment. thanx. writing the poem was easy and now i need all the good luck. but what a good luck! ;-)

lilypad1

Well I think you're a little ray of sunshine!
It was like a seriously good rap!
You go girl...Cute as could be.

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lily. thanx 4 the cutest comment. more power 2 u. ;-)

ejem

wow very different :) i enjoyed it alot
very clever!

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ejem. thanx for liking it. ;-)

Lady Leah

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh Billiant! so creative and funny!!! I love the third stanza

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lady leah. thanx. this is the prettiest laughter i've come across - soooooooooooo long! i wish u many many laughters, all exceeding this one and one better than the last. ;-)

vAmPiReFaN4eVeR

nice. very cool. ='_'=
you deserve a hug 4 this =]

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! a. thanx for a huggy comment. where r u. let's hug real time. or consider urself hugged. (i'm seeing stars.) ha! haa!! haaa!!! ;-)

Sir Vampire

Very clever play on the rhyme you have, and i'm not sure if anyone else noticed that not only did it all end in een or homophones but also it when from A-Z in order, very well done on this, even though its not my normal taste

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! sir. thanx. i'm honored to receive a comment from u, sir. thanx for reminding about homophones (wow!) and also the alphabetical rhyming. just goes to show, u r a keen reader. and that adds to my pleasure - of answering to this wonderful comment. thanx again. ;-)

Da Lee La

Bubbly - so apt :-D

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! da lee la. apt makes me amply happy. thanx. ;-)

jerkulez

WOW! so impressed i'm becoming a fan :D

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jerkulez. thanx for liking the poem. ;-)

XxDeathXxKissxX

wooo!!! *clap clap*
thats some rhyming!!
great job ^___^

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! d. thanx. thanx for liking the rhyming. ;-)

Willi

great poem. i like it

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! willi. u r a dear. thanx for a lovely comment. ;-)

quark

Good job! A very creative poem. Love the rhyming in it: very clever!

It has a strong regular beat (I say this cos' i'm a musicioan) and i think it should be performed because of this!

Oh, and - I'd respect your views on the beginning of my novel 'The Silencer' some feel free to check it out!

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! quark. thanx. if u could perform it, i'd be honored. 'coz u've better understanding of that. i'd be glad to've a musical note to hear it tinkling. :-)

Imajesusufreak1993

That poem is DA BOMB!!!! Keep up the good work!!!

P.S. I CAN'T THINK UP WORDS LIKE THAT!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! i. thanx. hope the bomb doesn't BLAST (or has it!) let's keep it ticking. ;-)

Flying Piggy

Very interesting poem. I liked it. Great job!

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! fp. thanx for a lovely comment. ;-)

FunnyBunny

The Rhyme, the Rhyme...I cannot rhyme to save my life. i envy you. nicely done. very creative.

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lien. thanx for a wonderful complement. i cannot write a novel for my life and u excel there. ;-)

Jawa

Niiice! Very fun to read indeed. Loved the way you played with the words. Now it's your turn to read mine ;)

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jawa. thanx for liking it. ;-)

mum55

Hi Bubbly...not much left for me to say as lots have already said it for me......exsept Wonderful.......smile be happy Juliet

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! mum. thanx for finding it wonderful. luv ya. ;-)

invisiblexme

cute =) and it took me almost the whole poem to realize that you were going through the alphabet...wow, im really slow today. but anyway, great job =D

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! i. thanx for an appreciative comment. it makes my day. ;-)

Devi D

Hmmm...creative situation...shame no ones commented my shit.

Good work!

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! devi. thanx for finding it creative. ;-)

B Leaf

A very invigorating and interesting web or words your threw up a slew of you and maybe a few of her too. Nice work i enjoyed it.

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! bleaf. thanx a lot for enjoying it. ur enjoyment increases my pleasure. thanx again. ;-)

Josee

popular isn't it? well it deserves to be, it was very intertaning! brilliant work!
-Josee-

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! josee. thanx for liking the poem. take care. ;-)

dezbee

Hey, bubbly. Good use of rhyming (and the alphabet) there.

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! dez. thanx for liking the poem. take care. ;-)

ashen

Haha. Cool. I could never get that many things to rhyme. Great job! :D

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ashen. thanx for a cool comment. take care. ;-)

Josstick Leary

Quite ambitious. I wish I had a knack for rhyming (and in alphabetical order, no less).

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jos. thanx for a lovely compliment. take care. ;-)

notebook

this is interesting. good job.

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! notebook. thanx. u've an interesting name too. ;-)

todeszellen91

very lovley

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! todes. thanx for a lovely comment. ;-)

Leighlo

Hey there. It's awesome. very cute.

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! leighlo. thanx for a cute comment. lol. ;-)

Phil Neale 1952

I've seen this style of poetry on another site, and marvel at the ability to use only one single rhyming sound to convey clear understandable meaning.

I cannot do it to save my life.

Excellent job.

Phil

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! phil. thanx a lot for such a wonderful comment. i feel great that u find it excellent. thanx again. ;-)

skibird17

This is funny... I liked it!:D

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ski. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

JoleneMoon

Awesome :P

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jolene. thanx for a lovely comment. lol. ;-)

BekahBoo

haha very nice.
so many "eens" lol
nice job! : )

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! bekahboo-een. thanx. so i've added one more. hope u like it too. ;-)

Ama

This one made me smile. I liked it, especially the rhymes in the end of the lines. Ama

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ama. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

rickyengland

Hey Bubbly..this is fun!

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! ricky. thanx for liking it. ;-)

julistar

U cannot Counter-Comment this one! It's a built-in catch 22 classic! U r not writing about yourself and you are already writing about commenting...this feels like a spontaneous lil inside joke we all got to share. Thanks!

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! juli. it has now become a CATCH 22 situation! a situational 'comedy'. thanx for such a hearty comment. lol. ;-)

britney

There is rhyming. There are A-Z 26 words. There is a storyline. There are two friends. There is booksie. Where is the room for comment except out of this world. Loved it very much. *-* ^-^ "-"

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! britney. u forgot the photo of duck, donna's fav bird. and thanx for an out of the world comment. loved it. lol. ;-)

Alectrona93

Wow! lol that was really cool! xD very creative lol and easy tofollow for someone who has stayed up to late (lol dont worry still a comment ^-^) lol ill def. have to read moreof your writing soon! ^-^

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! alectrona. a cool girl gets to read cool stuff. thanx for a lovely comment. lol. ;-)

QUICHE

I really enjoyed it, you have impressed me yet again with your creativity!

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! quiche. thanx for such a wonderful comment. lol. ;-)

xxSecretxx

heyyah x
very kl x
n creative x

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! beth. thanx for a lovely comment. yo! ;-)

Tara Annwyd Ink

Parapapapaa, I'm looovin' it!

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! tara. thanx for a musical comment. it makes me go ra ra. ;-)

eliza

The fate of my hand has given in to your poem. This pain is worth it.

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! el. no pain is worth writing. take care of ur hand as i want more comments from u. ;-)

saif wasiullah

You feel Donna is Komment Kueen, then I am Komment King. If Donna is Madonna, Saif is safe. How's that for originality and creativity.

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! saif. thanx for a KUTE komment. ;-)

deannajoy

awwww how cute i really like this one very creative excellent job!! :)

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! deanna. thanx for finding it creative. lol. ;-)

sunset293

Wow! this was just lovely!!!!

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! sunset. thanx a lot for a lovely comment. ;-)

CraZ4Life

I love it! It's so supreme...I love how each line just flows into the next when read and the rhyme is excellent!

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! craz4life. thanx. u've added a halo to a simple poem with ur heart-warming comment. thanx again. ;-)

Obsession

Wow this is great! i loved it!

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! obsession. thanx for a wonderful comment. ;-)

listener

Comment Queen is neat and written so ABLY
I love you dear, I love you BUBBLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! listener. WOW. u've broken all records in being innovative. ;-)

flowers

Your Top 10s are written so very CREDIBLY
That I read them once and then once DOUBLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! flowers. WOW ;-)

Author Comment:

hi! popular. WOW ;-)

matahari

I find none rude to you or even GRUMBLY
You are so cute and ever so HUMBLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! matahari. WOW ;-)

Happygirl

I like it alot! very creative

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! happy girl. thanx. i'm glad u found it creative. ;-)

donna

You have left your mark on me INDELIBLY
Your comments are sweet – all JUSTIFIABLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! donna. WOW ;-)

phantom
(not registered user)

You even present a point so KNOWLEDGEABLY
All worthy of praise, written LAUDABLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! phantom. WOW ;-)

addu

I read your poems all MEMORABLY
Especially Oo la laa, is one NOTABLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! addu. WOW ;-)

catspaw

You are frank, all too OSTENSIBLY
I read Good Bye!, all too PREFERABLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! catspaw. WOW ;-)

eliza

I find all good, nothing QUESTIONABLY
I read Bollywood and also SRK RELIABLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! el. WOW ;-)

robotic

You craft words, creatively, SUPERBLY
I can sing them, even so TREBLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! robotic. WOW ;-)

sapphire

Your letters too can not remain UNVISIBLY
Your answers are witty, ever so VOLUBLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! sapphire. WOW ;-)

veronica

Reading Wretched is walking firm, never WOBBLY
Its all fun, smiles , laughter, all XOBBLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! veronica. WOW ;-)

saif wasiullah

The review on GTA4 is a definite YOBBLY
Waiting for a book/novel that is ZOBBLY

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! saif. WOW ;-)

berry

i liked it. it's nice.

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! berry. thanx. i'm touched that u liked it. ;-)

Anaria

Hey this is really quite intertaining. I liked the poem alot it was different and kind of funky in a good way I assure you.

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kelly. thanx a lot for liking the poem. ur assurance is extremely assuring. thanx again. ;-)

rahbar1

The energy level in your poem and name matches..carry on bubbly...wonderful poem.
rahbar1.

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! rahbar. thanx for finding it energetic. urwonderful comment places a simple poem a little higher in esteem. thanx again. ;-)

Kavanya

I enjoy reading your poem. It is very interesting. I like the way how present it. It's really good.

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! kavanya. thanx for such a wonderful comment liking the poem. u've lent a star to a simple poem. thanx again. lol. ;-)

webster

Creative and unusual poem. Good work.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! webster. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

cookie

You are Booksie Queen. Loved it and enjoyed it very much.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! cookie. thanx. WOW. what a lovely praise. lol. ;-)

wafer

Wow. Such a trivial topic but you have made it extraordinary. Keep up the good work.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! wafer. thanx. everything seems trivial till the reader likes it. lol. ;-)

simmi

Cute. Very cute.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! simmi. thanx for finding it cute. ;-)

Zia Jaycee

Haha you seem very funny and cool! I am really glad I looked at this! :) read some of my stuff if u have the chance....love zia

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! zia. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

Canadian

You are so matter-of-fact stating you are creative. That shows pride and not arrogance. I am proud to be your fan. This is a prose poem. ^-^ *-* All my cat winks to you

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! canadian. thanx for a wonderful comment. thanx for the cat winks too. lol. ;-)

Michael L Lewis

Ahh. I finally made it to the bottom of the comment section... ha, ha! Love the poem! Very clever.
Write on!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! michael. thanx for such a wonderful comment. u r a dear. ;-)

Mel

The past week every time I thing I'm going to read something happen I just don't get that far. But now a week later I've read it...
All been said and all compliments been giving...
Mine is not much different than the rest. But must say I really enjoyed reading it... Love the way it rhyme and very very original thinking.
Thanks for a delightful read.

Mel

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! mel. a heartiest thanx for such a wonderful comment. if u enjoyed it, then the poem has served its purpose. thanx again. lol. ;-)

Vesta

Your rhyming is fantastic.
I giggled at the fact that i could see someone rapping this :)

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! vesta. thanx for finding it like a song. u r a dear. lol. ;-)

Tumshie

very clever play on words, great job

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! tumshie. thanx for an appreciative comment. lol. ;-)

snowzinger

That was funny and excellent rhyme scheme. All hail the Comment Queen! Hi, Im Snowzinger and check out my work Shootout!:First Contact, coming to a computer near you!

Hopefully.

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! snow. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

J A T

Very cute! Very clever ; ) I'd love to see it performed...ha !

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jat. thanx for liking CQ. how can v get it performed, any ideas! thanx again. lol. ;-)

xStephStephx09

very good very creative it made me laugh lol i liked it alot ur such a good writer bubbly! and i was reading thru some of these comments and saw the one from that mean Eric guy. He said booksie took off his account, well gee I wonder why lol *wink wink* anyways, ill look forward to ur comments on my things! thanks keep on writing!

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! steph. i can see u laughing and that makes me feel, the poem has served its purpose. i can visualise u looking beautiful laughing. keep smiling and laughing. lol. ;-)

Simone Robinson

I realy like it :D Please post on my work when you have time

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! simone. thanx for liking CIMA. lol. ;-)

Padfoot

Cool i love all the 'een' words. (smiles)
nice!!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! padfoot. thanx for a lovely comment. gee. ;-)

LifexSucksxLovexSucks

this is great, it really made me smile. :)
i love all the rhyming, really creative.
keep up the good work,
LifexSucksxLovexSucks

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! l. thanx for liking the poem. i wish u keep laughing and smiling - always. lol. ;-)

TaliaBlu

lol "Yet so fresh and so clean."
You have a strength in humorous poetry.
Great job; it looks like you had fun writing this.

--Tally

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! talia. u said it - i had fun writing it. thats how i survive and life goes on. thanx for a lovely comment. lol. ;-)

rose1

Just a revisit. I've read this poem 30 times in 16 days and still enjoy it. It'll ever remain fresh. It's a fun read. You hold my heart in your palm.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! rose. wow. this is a gigantic comment. i m very priviledged. read it another 100 times. and then another... ur readings ll make it remain fresher. u ve all my blessings. lol. ;-)

honeyrocketship

"She thinks I am the best Comment QUEEN
So I am glad to follow the ROUTINE
And join the fun on the commenting SCENE
I have come across all – old, mids and TEEN(S)"......hahahahahaha this is so creative and fun to read! I like it! Keep up the good work!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! honey. ur comment tastes like honey and i m dipping into it deep for i like all things sweet. lol. ;-)

L A Gardner

haha! very cool and very cute! put a smile on my face and brightened up a rainy day :)!!!

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lacey. thanx for such a cheering comment. it truly makes my day. keep smiling ever. lol. ;-)

Pokojskixxx

very creative and simple. it's ingenious!!!

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! pokojski. thanx for calling it ingenious. i like that. lol. ;-)

india

Brilliant poem. Fit to the occasion.

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! india. thanx for a brilliant comment. lol. ;-)

chamboooo

Totally creative and spontaneous. Keep it up.

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! chambs. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

Gojkov

Please, pay respect to other people's inteligence. This is awfull. And it does not have anything to do with poetry.
Read a little more.
Learn.

(Sincerely, I don't think that reading and learning will help. This is just a perfect example of talent-lack).

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! gojkov. everyone is entitled to their opinions and i respect urs. let me see, how i can improve. ha! haa!! haaa!!! lol ;-)

MissUnderstood

That was awesome! I could never of rhymed all those words!! AMAZING! Keep up the good work! I really enjoyed it! I got some new ones. Short and sweet. Check em out if you would like... Again I loved this one!!!

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! m. thanx for liking the poem. and u ll shortly find me on ur page. let me clear this backlog. lol. ;-)

Lance

Very, VERY nice! Brought a smile to my face! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you on this! Very enjoyable read, WELL DONE!!!

:-)

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! lance. its better to be late than never. thanx for a lovely read. i'm glad u enjoyed it. lol. ;-)

WhatIsInAName

haha :)
what a fun poem :) xx

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hi¡ w. thanx for finding the poem funny. lol. ;-)

Jason George

Ha, that's very creative. You are so much better at rhyming than I am. good work and keep it up! :)

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! jason. i m glad u liked the rhyming in the poem. lol. ;-)

abbaammi

A fab fab poem. Humourous and enjoyable. A nice comment on comment-requesters. He he.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! a. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

pracha

I am still giggling.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! pracha. ièm glad the poem could make u laugh. lol. ;-)

mum
(not registered user)

i like it.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! . thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

yonaika
(not registered user)

hahaha!! cute!

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! yonaika. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

pompous

This is the poem after my own heart.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! pompous. thanx. lol. ;-)

LeAnne

wow, so sorry im so late. but i loved this!
hm, very abstract and creative! Luvs!

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! leanne. thanx for a lovely comment. lol. ;-)

Chello

i think you're a great poet. i've read several of your works and they were all good. keep on posting! c",)

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! chello. thanx a lot for the encouraging words. lol. ;-)

Michael68

Great poem bubbly, I really like this . You have a great gift when it comes to writing. Excellent job. :)

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! mikey. thanx for a lovely, lovely compliment. i shall cherish it forever. lol. ;-)

Bella Italian

Cute Poem! I like your sense of humor and personality! It shows through in all of your work.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

hi@ bella. thanx. i'm glad u liked it. gee. ;-)

poewhit

Some list of comments, said most - I'M BREATHLESS and starting to list.

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! poewhit. thanx for liking the poem. lol. ;-)

soul

i agree, your comments are always positive.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! soul. thanx for a lovely comment. lol. ;-)

122333MexicanPeanut122333

Looks like the huge list of results above shows that you know a good deal of other Comment Queens! Good Job, Bubbly.

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! mp. thanx for an appreciative comment. keep rolling. lol. ;-)

Isabel WordenKlym

Wow, with all the comments I almost forgot to comment on your poem myself. Sorry I haven't done this sooner.
I love all the words that rhyme. I may try this myself. Good job!

Posted: Aug 16, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! isabel. thanx. i'm glad u liked the poem. lol. ;-)

Brooke Gross

I like the all caps on the rhyming words.

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

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