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Submitted: May 2, 2008 Reads: 96 Comments: 31 Likes: 32
And there was a man called Don
And he was quite a moron
To some he even seemed a threat
That they had to say, 'Don Quit.'
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He asked his wife what was wrong.
She said they were just being strong.
It's not 'Don Quit' but 'Don't Quit.'
"Now, darling, let's go back to our suite."
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Posted: May 3, 2008
Pretty smart bubbly.^^
Posted: May 3, 2008
I had a good time laughing. Lovely
Posted: May 3, 2008
Nice.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Humorous.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Funny and tickling.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Some wives do have them.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Ha ha haa.
Posted: May 3, 2008
I was remembering Don Quixote.
Posted: May 3, 2008
This is a weekend treat, my favorite poet.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Short and sweet (sweet, just like you).
Posted: May 3, 2008
Good work. 100 thumbs up.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Nice verse. Keep it up.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Bless you, girl. You make me smile.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Good. It's humor in poetic form.
Posted: May 3, 2008
You are too energetic to write such funny poems.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Wow. If the wife is cutie, you are a sweetie.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Keep the words flowing.
Posted: May 3, 2008
Lovely. Reminds me of my childhood writings.
Posted: May 3, 2008
wow, lovely wife....lucky DON and even bubblier bubbly....
Posted: May 3, 2008
great work .. ! so unsually entertaining! wow ! :)
Posted: May 3, 2008
My first name's Don!...eh?
Your's truly...Don Vito Corleone.
Posted: May 3, 2008
You too don't quit, Queen Bee.
Posted: May 4, 2008
Great poem.
Posted: May 4, 2008
If I had such a wife, I won't (quit).
Posted: May 4, 2008
My dear, this is something to munch over.
Posted: May 4, 2008
Darn, that Don is a lucky dude. (That was from my brother who was reading over my shoulder.) anywho. Funny poem. I like it.
Posted: May 4, 2008
Hmm... not sure what to say.
~DarkFairy~
Posted: May 5, 2008
It's a cute poem, Bubbly. Can't wait to read more of your work
Posted: May 5, 2008
i don't get it. i've added to Evol.
Posted: May 7, 2008
It was funny poem.Haha,and i read it 3 times...Its nice poem.:)
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
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