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it's crazy, zany.
enjoy, laugh, tickle urself silly.
just for fun, entertainment.
it's pure SILLY.
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Submitted: May 7, 2008 Reads: 191 Comments: 50 Likes: 45
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It really is crazy... If I ever find a woman like that...
Posted: May 7, 2008
Very silly. Crazy. Very colorful poem.
MA
Posted: May 7, 2008
hehe i like these crazy feelings u used in this poem, keep working hard.ciao
Posted: May 7, 2008
I needed to smile...I rarely laugh anymore but I did enjoy it a lot. It's not easy to get me to smile, but you did it. Very funny.
Posted: May 7, 2008
silly and crazy, i like that
Posted: May 7, 2008
lol cool i like that
Posted: May 7, 2008
I agree its crazy but it keeps you reading to the end. Nice hook!:-)
Posted: May 7, 2008
Random, i love it hahahahahah!!!
Posted: May 7, 2008
hehhe ..! OoH I lOv3 thaT ;)
Posted: May 8, 2008
I remember Princess D. She was people's princess and still rules our hearts. You sway me with your poems.
Posted: May 8, 2008
Oo la la
Posted: May 8, 2008
You are Queen Bee. This poem has been featured. WOW
Posted: May 8, 2008
Oo I love this (poem). Oo I love (you).
Posted: May 8, 2008
Oo la la. You are after my heart. And this woman, I donèt know.
Posted: May 8, 2008
Silly and crazy poem, but it makes me smile. I like it. Great Job.
Posted: May 8, 2008
haha funny!!
Posted: May 8, 2008
It was silly, but I needed a laugh.
If there ever was such a woman who always said 'oh I love that' with everything I spoke to her...I think I would die
Posted: May 8, 2008
This woman got where she wanted. Oui!
Posted: May 9, 2008
I like the visual of olympic torch in the shape of woman burning. Very appropriate for this poem.
Posted: May 9, 2008
I want to be featured here.
Posted: May 9, 2008
I want to be featured here with this torch but not with this woman.
Posted: May 9, 2008
This woman is a tickling bomb.
Posted: May 9, 2008
I love this woman. I want her.
Posted: May 9, 2008
A beauty
Posted: May 9, 2008
I want this woman torch. So cute
Posted: May 9, 2008
i love this very cute zany poem great work bubbly
Posted: May 9, 2008
I think I know this person. Funny poem!
Posted: May 10, 2008
This is a great poem!
Posted: May 10, 2008
Ool la la! I've met her I think? What a bounty of fun.
Posted: May 11, 2008
Really good. funny very creative
Posted: May 12, 2008
I read it three times.
Oooh, I love that.
Keep it up.
Posted: May 12, 2008
My smile was from ear to ear........what a wonderful, crazy piece, but fun. Loved it!! :)
Posted: May 12, 2008
This is when you put in a CD with the Psycho theme on it. It fits perfectly, (To the woman not you) she must need a refill of her Prozac. Lol, Anyway, great stuff, great stuff.
~Kaori
Posted: May 13, 2008
hi,
sorry i havn't commented on your work before but the truth is i dont really get modern poetry. Nor can i really appreciate straight forward satire. Regardless i have read most of your work and its good. You have your own style and earthy zest which sparkles when you write. Hey, if you ever write old school poetry the one's with rhymes, symbolism and metaphors, i'll be able to give you a much better analysis of your work. till then!
P.S by the way thanx for reading my work too.
Posted: May 14, 2008
hi,
sorry i havn't commented on your work before but the truth is i dont really get modern poetry. Nor can i really appreciate straight forward satire. Regardless i have read most of your work and its good. You have your own style and earthy zest which sparkles when you write. Hey, if you ever write old school poetry the one's with rhymes, symbolism and metaphors, i'll be able to give you a much better analysis of your work. till then!
P.S by the way thanx for reading my work too.
Posted: May 14, 2008
hi,
sorry i havn't commented on your work before but the truth is i dont really get modern poetry. Nor can i really appreciate straight forward satire. Regardless i have read most of your work and its good. You have your own style and earthy zest which sparkles when you write. Hey, if you ever write old school poems the one's with rhymes, symbolism and metaphors, i'll be able to give you a much better analysis of your work. till then!
P.S by the way thanx for reading my work too.
Posted: May 14, 2008
You have a knack for making extraordinary out of ordinary.
Posted: May 14, 2008
If laughter was this poem.
Posted: May 14, 2008
If u can make me laugh, then the world is happy. (joking). Simple and good.
Posted: May 14, 2008
If this woman could be true, I'll be damned.
Posted: May 14, 2008
You know how to keep us in good humour.
Posted: May 14, 2008
Great ! Here in Brazil we say that " Peper in others eyes is refreshing" And this is perfect to your poem .
Posted: May 15, 2008
Hi, earlier when I read ur profile, I was amazed to find that u 2 have written or I had written in the similar style now this poem reminds me of my poem Hip Hip Hurray.
Keep it up!!!
Posted: May 16, 2008
OMG I absolutely love this. It's so random and out there, like nothing I've ever read before. It's funny and yet it makes sense. I have a couple of friends that are kinda like this as well and I like to trip them up to make them rethink what they're about to say...it's priceless to see the look on their faces! Good job and keep up the great work!
Posted: May 16, 2008
Hi Bubbles,
And there was a woman, who
Always said, “Ooo, I love that”.
Silly, funny? No. But sery well put satire and irony.
How many people do we know [male and female], who pass of every trajedy and significant event with a vapid, shallow comment. Uncaring airheads the lot.
JG
Posted: May 19, 2008
Um...wow...that WAS pretty crazy... o.O
Posted: May 23, 2008
haha! got to love craziness...! beautiful.
matmoo :)
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
Bubbly this is a great one if I've seen one. This made me chuckle a plenty I appreciate a laugh now and again thanks. -_-
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Awesome.
I love that attitude.
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
lol thats funny love the last two lines
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
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