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Poem By: controverse
Humor


So, in response to Hugs and Kisses' challenge...I had to write a poem for the song "4 minutes" by Madonna featuring Justin Timberlake and Timbalad...in the point of view of Madonna. Since I like neither the song nor the artists I just decided to make fun of them...through a horrendously random semi-poem about a matrix-like world. I guess.

You might not get it if you don't watch the music video first, find in on YouTube here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfUjfioAnKY

Yea, it wouldn't be so random but I had to have the following 5 words as well: zany, crust, innocent, frame, and goddess.

Um, enjoy? Haha... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


        LOADING REALITY SCENARIOS…COMPLETE

        LOADING CLUSTER AWARENESS…COMPLETE

        EXTRAPOLATING MATRIX DIMENSIONS…

 

        SYSTEM ERROR

 

        LOADING FAILSAFE.SYS… NOT FOUND

        LOADING EMERGENCY BACKUP… FILE CORRUPTED

 

She was fairly amused when,

This morning,

She watched the crust of my pie flaked away.

She was horrified when

Her picture frame crumbled into the void.

But she really realized what was wrong when

Her house started collapsing onto itself.

 

        SYSTEM SHUTDOWN…

        ESTIMATED TIME REMAINING: 4:06

 

She was the program inside the program;

Created and trained only for this:

Suppression of a matrix error.

 

    ++EMERGENCY BACKUP++

    Memory Bank Error

    System Error Detected…

    Find CjtYBya(?)…CjteBoe(?)…CuteBoy

    Commence dNc3(?)…dNcE(?)..daNcE

 

She walked out of the and called for a boy:

“Troy? Who’s troy? No. Not Roy.”

“Forget about Dustin! How about..”

“Him. Yea.”

 

So she got the boy to tag along and started to dance

Among the many innocent, wise and the zany

Who soon became one of the lost lives of many.

But when she reached the supermarket she struck a foreboding stance.

 

    SuperMarket Detected…

    Find ConveyorBelt

    Commence Crawling

 

She soon located a conveyor belt started to mount,

Her boy did the same thought it was not necessary.

And soon she began to crawl as a Goddess of Groceries.

But the world behind them soon crumbled so they stopped their stunt.

 

        ESTIMATED TIME REMAINING: 2:35

 

    Emergency Backup Execute…

    Find ParllelUnvrse(?)…Located

    Commence #%!@

 

With two minutes to spare she pulled his boy to her lips,

And they were locked together in an eager kiss.

As their alternate selves danced away and the world crumbled into abyss,

She once again gyrated her hips.

 

        EMERGENCY BACKUP FAILED

 

        SYSTEM SHUTDOWW…COMPLETE

 

        REBOOTING…

 


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Comments:

hahahaha! ok so the title made me laugh and then i read the tags for it and that made me laugh. i think the funniest part of this poem was the computer lingo lmao that was great. well you did a hell of a lot better than i could ever do lol so kudos to you!! i'm gonna click the "i like it" and now walk away laughing lol

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Ahahaha I'm really glad you liked it :D

omg I love it!!! You did a great job! I'll have to click the "I like it" button! Yippee!! You are the first person to complete my challenge and you did SO WELL! Good for you!!!! WEEEEEEEE!!! Happy happy happy!!!

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Ahahaha, yaya thanks ^-^

this is certainly a tripped out and funny poem...and creative too ;D

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol I agree with you there. Thanks :)

hehe this is so funny well done :L

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thanks



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