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What Really Happened To Jack and Jill on that Hill

Poetry By: Indie Skreet

Tags: Dentist, Blow, Job, Humor, Sex

Thanks to bobthebuilder for his inspiration ........ now go to bobthebuilder's page to see his witty interpretation.

Submitted:Feb 17, 2013    Reads: 69    Comments: 11    Likes: 6   

Dedicated to bobthebuilder

one of my nice American Booksie friends has just informed me that he did not get the reference to the word, 'rag'. It is common terminology in this part of the world for 'temper'.

What Really Happened on that Hill

Jack and Jill went up the hill
To do what they not oughter
Jill lay down without a frown
And Jack saw no need to court her

Jill went down
Whilst on the ground
As was very willing
But Jack got up when realised that
Embedded was Jill's filling

By now Jack had lost his rag
Not to mention his erection
One to dentist, one to doctor
They went in opposite direction.

Now the moral of this story
I guess can only be
Do not give a blow job
If inadequate dentistry.


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