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Body Odour

Poetry By: Mr Watson

This is a poem about personal hygiene, and they are oblivious to the fact they stink.

Submitted:Nov 8, 2013    Reads: 189    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   

You don't know you have BO?

But your aroma tells me so

Stale sweat, unwashed clothes

It permeates around my nose


Do you aspire to perspire?

That fusty musty smell is dire

Best go home and have a wash

Give yourself a real good splosh


Your personal hygiene needs attention

Keep my mouth shut

Best not to mention


I know it can be clinical

I'm being rather cynical

It's not a medical disorder

Purchase some wash powder and bicarb of soda


Deodorant or aftershave

May well mask this nauseas wave

Your jacket smells so much

Like a tangy cheese, an unwashed crutch


I always smell an essence

When I am within your presence

It's not a floral smell

More like rotting fauna

Ugh bloody ell !



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