This is a poem very, very loosely based on a true story. A man did indeed bring me a very large frozen trout and plonked it on the checkout where i work. i wrote him this poem as a thankyou, he also speaks in a very broad derbyshire accent hence lots of abbreviations, hope you enjoy it! View table of contents...

Submitted: Feb 15, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   

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Anna Therese

Wow! I can just imagine that being read out at a poet's cafe where writers share their work. Ebbs and flows beautifully while telling a story.

Posted: Feb 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou very much Anna, a big compliment considering your own talent for writing :-)

craaig

Thats a whopper of a tail! Very engaging read. I LIKE IT.
I hope you don't mind me pointing out what, I think, is a typo in the 6th line from the bottom "In that AGA oF hers"
Thanks for the fun poem.
craaig

Posted: Mar 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou very much craaig glad you enjoyed it, I will have a look and assess the damage lol cheers **

craaig

Where'd it go?

Posted: Nov 1, 2008

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