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Getting caught

Script By: Reaper
Humor


A play i had to write for Drama, it had to be called Getting caught.

I got a B- for this script
I got an A+ for my acting in the performance View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 18, 2008    Reads: 1080    Comments: 16    Likes: 6   


Getting caught

Actor one (male)= Jason (me!)

Actor two (female)= Cecelia (when I had to preform the play this actor was a guy alt)

Actor three (male)= the dad
Actor four (male)= cop

Cecelia in her room, Jason climbs through the window

Jason: Yo ready to go baby, My ride's outback

Cecelia: Coming

Both actors climb out the window

In car

Cecelia: I didn't know you had your license

Jason: I don't baby, I don't

Awkward science

Cecelia: look the party (pointing)

At the party dancing (dance music playing)

Jason: I'll go get some drinks

Cecelia: ok honey

Jason get drinks and fake drugs

Jason: I got some babe (gives drink to Cecelia)

Cecelia: thanks
Actors start dancing closely (yes, i was dancing closely with a guy alt)

Actors act drunk for the rest of the play

Jason: yo, want some weed

Cecelia: no babe, not here, I have to pee

Cecelia runs of stage , cop walks in, music stops

Cop: EVERYONE DOWN!

Jason: YO BAIL NIGGA'S

Jason runs to the cat and shoots the cop with cap gun, cop dies

IN car

Jason and Ceceila run and get in to car, then speed of

Jason: crap the cops (cop sirens go on)

Cecelia: (says random stuff cos she is drunk)

Cop sirens fade

Jason: wow we lost them

Cecelia:what are we doing

Jason touches her leg (yes I had to do this to the guy alt)

Jason: we going home for some fun, lots of fun.

THE END!

Note this is the first script i have ever written so be nice! lol


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Comments:

bad memories....

Posted: Mar 18, 2008

You did really well, I avoid doing scripts I can never picture it in my head as well as a novel. I loved when I read you telling about acting it out with the guy, that was really funny, but so sad for you, but at least you got a great grade for acting so well.

Oh and I love the new profile pic :D

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes scrips are harder, i only do time when they are needed for drama, because when u play a scrip you write if all goes well is a excellent feeling!, i have one more but it's a little longer and coz they're in my drama book i need to type them out and with formatting it can take a long time!.

It was funny for the ppl seeing the play to, and we got better marks for having the bravery to do it with guys!

Lionheart
(not registered user)

hhehehehehhahahahahahAHahHAhAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
[lionheart has fallen off his chair laughing with tears in his eyes!!!!] HAhahaHahAhHA!!!!!!
HAhAhahHAHAaHa!!!!hhaHAAHHAHAHAHA!!!!!!AhAhAHHAAH!!!!1
[lionheart is chocking and coughing] HAhaHhAhaH!!!!!
WITH A GUY!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!1

ohhhhh......... thankyou for that..... it was worth reading, and believe me that script was done well. The only problem was the misuse of language, ie. 'cos'

Funny one Reaper, really funny hAhHAHAhaH!!!!

Posted: Mar 18, 2008

Author Comment:

yes with a guy [breaks out in tear's]. When i wrote it was was meant to be serious.yes but when i wrote it in my drama book i misused the language and i juts decided to keep it that way.

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAH!!!!!!! im sorry... anyway that was a nice script and whats with the BOY!!! did he look like a girl? ok that's wierd... wats up with the drugs and...

Posted: Mar 19, 2008

Author Comment:

well they girl was supp to do it with was sick soo yeh.

ugh
my names jason :(

Posted: Mar 21, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah, and?, its not like the person the script is u, unless.....

ugh
my names jason :(

Posted: Mar 21, 2008

Author Comment:

u said that twice!

ugh
my names jason :(

Posted: Mar 21, 2008

Author Comment:

THREE TIMES!

oh btw, i heard ur stalkingg my friendddssss
THANKS
YOU HAD TO HAVE THE NAME JASON!!!!!!

Posted: Mar 21, 2008

Author Comment:

ok then....

Sorry about jason he gets kind of um uh wierd. he commented me and said he was supposed to be the main character or something. i think it was good. keep reading

KK

Posted: Mar 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks... and yeah i was a little freaked out...

thhis is really good. but what do you mean by bad memories? yeah, and the guy part i don't think was so funny. (i know the feeling). but it was funny. i like how you ended it.

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

i mean bad memories coz i had to do it with a guy... that came out wrong.. oh well.. Thanks for commenting

HAHA! This is awesome!! It's hilarious, i cracked up every time you had to do something with the girl, but played by the guy.. haha... i feel really sorry for you!! But i liked your script, it's really good!

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks, i feel sorry for me to! lol.

Wow. I loved it! I laughed (quietly since it's like 7 in the morning). I agree with some of the people, it was funny because you were playing it with a guy. But overall it was funny, enjoyable, and HILARIOUS!

Posted: Mar 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! i yelled (quietly, lol)

I thought this would be a rowdy house party movie type thing...eh? I nearly shat myself when I read the line "YO BAIL NIGGA'S!"...eh? Was the cop black...eh? I know your know for spelling errors you will normally have, BUT FOR GOD SAKE!...eh? A part of a line says "Jason runs to the cat...eh? And I think XxsportsMVP25xX snortin' some if you know what I mean...eh?

Your's truly...Don Vito Corleone.

Posted: Apr 26, 2008

Author Comment:

lol, nah the cop not black. and yeh XxsportsMVP25xX did freak me out!

hi! reaper. mmm. i'll give this an AAA. but u got to expaaaaaaaaaaaaaand on it. ;-)

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

lol. Thanks Bubbly! I'll take that in for next time!

I would after this resounding success
Its unlikely you'll improve on the craftsmanship
GB Shaw gave up when he was 97.
are you contemplating living that long-
I just wondered.

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

?

sorry sorry!!!
I didnt realise you were so young
forgive an old fogey like me who hasnt the patience to read the profile.
No I am sory.
I have done this before much to my regret
OK!
Don

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

umm, ok.



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