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Shadow's life part one

Short Story By: Alistar
Humor


shadow has a life! read about it!! u pervert!! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 12, 2008    Reads: 127    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


Acording to legened Yellowfang canyon is home to a serial killingpsychotic criminal.
That didn’t stop me from living there.

Of course there are wolves and Zombies and u know all the stuff that would put most people off… but not me. I am going to make a deal with them all…. Ehh well, Hopefully…

Unbeknownsed to everyone it was a dark and stoiry might, Well thats not true i Knew it was a dark and stormy but sill..I was walking down the long path in my Camo jeans and my most awesome t shirt, when i heared a sound!.
hello, Halftooth?”, i siad, peering into the darkness
Shadow”, a large grey wolf, Stalked out of the darkness.
this is Stoneclaw, my deputy”, halftooth said flicking his tail to a darker grey wolf.
greetings” stoneclaw snarled, showing yellow fangs
um hi, How's the prey running”

Prey is scarce”

2 days later.

The Deal worked much better then I thought it would. But now I’m in my friend Collins village. it’s Called rouge village .We went to the bar in the Middle of the village. There was a song playing It went like this: wonderboyyyyyyy what is the secret Of your power s?? now to tell you about young Nasty man nemeses to wonder boy, what powers you ask? well how aboutthe power of flight that doing anything For you? what about the power to kill a yak From 100 yards away with mind bullets you! i Mean wonder boys powers the power to touch You (emotionally) clickwhat are you doing” said the bar tender. “Taking the wonder boy disc” . You
Can’t do that. BANG “I can now”. Collin and ILeft the bar. The guards heard the gun shot. They came running we shot at them but there was too many guards. We jumped in Collins truck it had a machine gun on the back . You drive I shoot .I said. Right .said Collin. BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG the guards are shooting back ‘there is still too many’ I yelled to Collin. He swerved and they where heading straight to the guards and he said ‘hold on! You might want to cover your eyes as well!’ SPLAT! I figured that was a blood splatter? I said and now because Collin has been expelled from his village where going to go to mine! you might not know that my power is darkness so there for my village is dark and you might not be able to see very well but at least I can so grab on to me and ill lead you to your destination luckily we have lights in my house so you Don’t need to grab on to me. I said, welcome
To my house. So roomy not what I expected, said

Colin. “I’m not that poor” I said. “I know, I know” said Colin. “I'm hungry whats for dinner”asked Colin? “what do you want”I said “oh crap I shouldn't have said that” I thought.
“Ok I changed my mind wher having chicken” I said.

2 HOURS LATER.

Cloe your back” I said “dhu” Cloe whisperd “ I called you did you bring a chicken”I asked “ yep all reddy to cook” said cloue. Colin jumped from behind a coner as cloue drew her dager and ponted it at colin. “I just wanted to help cook” said colin in a scared and tiny voice “ sorry tomas hasent got the security yet”, Sighed Cloe “shut up you know I HATE that name” shadow yelled jokingl. Suddenly the windows shattered and a vampire flew in.
HI, im bob!”, said the vamire.
hi?”, i said, Question in my eyes. Bob the vampire walked over to Colin and bit him on the neck. Then flew out the window!.
what the hell?”, said colin “hey cool, im a vampire now!”, He continued. “AHHHHH get away freak” screamed Cloe ,colin looked sad.


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Comments:

LAMO! ohh ali your so random!!! This is unedited i take, i saw alot of mistakes.. I'll help u edit in just a min! lol. Cant wait for more!!!

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

ok

Kristy
(not registered user)

Heya

Its Gd

but BOB How imaginative (rolls eyes)lol

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

jkghe sitptug euior :)

This was...good... :)
It was pretty random!
I liked it! :D
The Vampire bit could be a little longer and a little more detailed, but otherwise it would be great! :D

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

WOOHOO another random person!!! YES!!! soz that was probably random hahahaha meh thats not funny but random.... ok im just gonna shut up now... HAHAHAHA...LOL...random

Posted: Apr 17, 2008

Good! Though very very random, write more plzzzz!!!!

Posted: Apr 17, 2008



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