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A kind of sequel to "Into the darkness". "The Cane Man" is back at his lodgings and this time he is not alone......
One day soon he will get caught kind reader. Part of me always wants the bad man to win....
"Howdy doody time kiddies the bad man is here"
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Submitted: Apr 10, 2008 Reads: 77 Comments: 6 Likes: 6
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What a clever exchange of dialogue! Very readable though intense. Do you see the "bad man" as the underdog perhaps?
Posted: Apr 10, 2008
Well, well - Now I see what you were doing today. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but I can't find a thing wrong with it. In fact, I loved it! I have this thing I do when I'm really into what I'm reading - I subconsciously pull my shirt collar over my mouth. (Strange I know.) I was doing that though. This is brilliant! You amaze me with your talent. I could go on and on, but it would probably be rude to take up so much of your space. Fantastic job!
Posted: Apr 10, 2008
I like this one better than the first. This one has all the same sinisterness, but it's laced with all that wicked humor. Honestly, you are simply amzing.
Posted: Apr 10, 2008
OH, I agree with LC - this is so great. It's sort of chilling the way he is so matter of fact. I see the genius...
Posted: Apr 11, 2008
Thank you to everyone for making this story No. 1 !!!! I appreciate it very much.
Peace
Boneman
Posted: Apr 11, 2008
boney, very witty. i agree with lacey and dragonfly and buttercup you have an amazing talent. but please dont chew your fingers you need them for typing and making your pies!!!!!!!!!!!!
hope there will be more of this soon. i like reading stuff like that that makes me laugh out loud.
take care
your friend
snow xxx
Posted: Apr 13, 2008
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