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Hobbit King

Short story By: L Hale
Humor



I made this on Facebook when a friend messaged me: "I'm bored, tell me a story"

BOOM, I sent whatever this is. It's in CAPS because I'm silly with my friends like that.

I also made the profile picture for this on paint, I thought is was lame, but feel free to comment. XD


Submitted:Oct 27, 2012    Reads: 69    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


ONCE THERE WAS A HOBBIT IN THE MAGICAL WORLD OF MISAGUFERDUK

THIS WORLD HATED HOBBITS, BUT THIS HOBBIT HAD A DREAM.

THIS DREAM WAS TO FIX THE KINGDOM, TO FIX THE FLAWS. ALL FLAWS, EXCEPT ONE.

HE DID NOT WISH TO CHANGE THE PEASANTS VIEWS ON HOBBITS.

HE ASKED FOR THE WIZARD OF HIBULUFEN TO ASSIST HIM.

THE WIZARD HELPED THE HOBBIT BECOME KING, BUT AS A PRICE, THE WIZARD TURNED HIM HUMAN.

THIS WAS THE THING THAT THE HOBBIT HAD FEARED.

HE, NOW KING, FIXED THE KINGDOM AND MADE IT WELL.

HOBBITS REMAINED HATED, FOR HE, AS A HUMAN, COULD NOT SHOW THEM THE GOOD HEARTS OF HOBBITS.

IF HE WERE A HOBBIT AND FIXED THE KINGDOM, HE COULD HAVE CHANGED THE PEASANTS VIEWS.

ONCE AGAIN, THE 'HOBBIT' CALLED THE WIZARD, THE 'HOBBIT' BECAME A HOBBIT ONCE AGAIN, BUT NOW NO ONE BELIEVED HE WAS KING.

THEY KILLED HIM, ACCUSING THE HOBBIT OF KILLING THE PAST KING TO TAKE THE THRONE.

SEVERAL DECADES LATER, THE HOBBIT'S 'FIXING' HAD DIED OUT, KILLING THE KINGDOM.





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