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What Are You Doing?

Short Story By: LilGpoet
Humor


lol this just popped in my head after I thought about my 2 sisters, my dad, stepmom and me. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 26, 2007    Reads: 47    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


I cleaned up the living room, while she swept the floor.

When we were done, we did nothing more.

I sat on the couch, as she did too,

Everyone in the house had nothing else to do.

I sat back to relax, she copied the move,

From that point on, I had something to prove.

I looked at the ground, then at her.

She looked at the ground, then at me.

My dad thought we were being silly.

I spread out my arm, then spread my fingers.

She did the same, so we just lingered.

She never did this, ever before.

Was it because shes becoming bored?

She thought it was stupid to copy someone else, I thought she was wrong, but that stayed to myself.

I got real suspicious of what exactly she's proving, so I put down my arm and said, "What are you doing?"


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Comments:

lol this was cute :)

Posted: Aug 27, 2007

Author Comment:

Oh, sorry it took me so long to respond. Thanx

LilG,

In your writing, I could see this pictured clearly. The whole thing was funny and very silly. I couldn't stop laughing. This was absolutely great!

Posted: Sep 12, 2007

Author Comment:

OH sorry, thanx =P

That was cuuuute! I enjoyed your story. Really that was kind of a family moment through out the whole thing. Pictured and wrote perfectly. Well done

-DD

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx,I tried to put some family in there. =P



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