Son of a Caveman #12 - Gone Fishin - Humor Short Story

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Son of a Caveman #12 - Gone Fishin

Short Story By: Marathongman
Humor

Tags: fishing, with, no, poles???, cavedad, is, smitten, she\'s, a, reel, kitten, very, alureing, 8, he, she\'s, hoping, that, his, pole

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Submitted: Dec 3, 2008 Reads: 70 Comments: 5 Likes: 4

           Pace Pace Pace

CAVEMOMS THOUGHT BUBBLE

        I killed dinner hours ago
        and he is still not home
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          Stomp stomp stomp

        Cavehoney I'm home!
      Don't worry about supper I'm
    going fishing with the caveguys

          TWO HOURS LATER

CAVEMOMS THOUGHT BUBBLE

MMmmm that's odd
he forgot his fishin poles?

            Working late??
      Fishing with no poles???

   MEANWHILE AT THE BAIT SHOP

BAIT SHOP GIRL

CAVEDADS THOUGHT BUBBLE

+ = =

TOP TEN REASONS FOR AN AFFAIR

10 Cavedad is smitten

9 She's a reel kitten very alureing

8 He wants to fish in her pond

7 She's hoping that his pole is long

6 He's hoping for a pole dance

5 She wants to get in his pants

4 On a SCALE of 1 to 10 she's a 10

3 He's not going to stringer along

2 Her fishnets won't catch crabs

1 She is hooked on him

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Comments:

Anastasia Starlena

Turn about is fair play I suppose. The saga continues. I loved the top 10 Brilliant. I think this is a very funny one. I am having writing on my romantic poem now thanks alot lol.....
Great job!

Posted: Dec 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You as always

HybridProphet

LoL! I like!
It's funny, in a satirical sorta way, and got me smilin'.

Posted: Dec 4, 2008

Author Comment:

It's always a pleasure to put a smile on a readers face. Thanks for taking the time to comment

See, now I thought so. Naughty Cave parents. What hope is there for caveson??
Well done again mate. I liked the pictures + pictures = pictures. I'm getting more used to this multi media approach. Great stuff.

Posted: Dec 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for turning me on to the term -multi media . I'm getting into more now. As always thanks for the comment

Sharvanem

great stuff!

Posted: Dec 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again

Gentlespirit

Had to happen. Equality between the sexes I suppose. But again, sooooooo funny. Though looks to me like caveman has caught a trout (then she also looks like she needs a hook in her mouth) Ooooooooooooo bitchy.

love the pictures
Love the imagery and the pace as i have said b4) sooooo funny.....soooooooooo where is THE book.

chuckle chuckle chuckle.....

Posted: Dec 13, 2008