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Country: United States
Member Since: Aug 25, 2011

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Undead Wastleland: Chapter 2

Short Story by Jeffrey Chavez
Posted: Aug 29, 2011
Chapter 2 of Undead Wasteland. I know it's under short...

Undead Wastleland

Short Story by Jeffrey Chavez
Posted: Aug 25, 2011
Nathan Miller just needed someone to care. What he got...



Maybe I have a knack for writing, maybe I don't. I would love to find out! I need real critisism on all aspects of my writing. If it's bad, tell me! Where can I improve?

I'm just kinda getting my feet wet here so please be honest.

Any feedback will be appreciated. Thank you in advance!

Edit: Thank you all who commented on the story and gave me advice. I tried my best to incorporate all the suggestions. I'll also try to make the next chapters better and spend a little more time on them so that they don't seem so rushed. Thanks again!

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