Hey there--

First of all, thanks for checking out my story. I am so excited someone is actually reading it! If you have the time, I would really appreciate if you could tell me what you thought of it. You can do that by leaving a comment here, on my wattpad page , or you can message me on my twitter account @la_neira .

I will be updating this (hopefully) weekly, with a new chapter every time. I expect to finish by Labor Day 2013--here's to hoping I make that deadline!

Of course, I am interested in reading what other new writers are doing--just send me (on twitter) a link to your work and I would be happy to check it out. Please review mine first, though! I get plenty of random requests for reviews on Wattpad, Authonomy, and Figment... yet to receive a comment on those sites that is actually related to my story.

Thanks again for reading! Hope you enjoy it :)

Here's the little blurb I post on other free writing websites:

A boy on the edge of adulthood from an American city in 2045 is sent into virtual reality to complete his rite of passage of full citizenship--but the world he's sent in to is far beyond anything he has faced before.

New chapters weekly.