Sympathy---@

This is my first published work, I would like feedback and advice would be nice :) I hope you like it. (scroll down for summary)

He's not in love anymore and instead of talking about it with her he drifts away and develops a hostile attitude towards her advances. She then leaves him wanting nothing more to do with his callow behavior.

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