My Misconception

Hi, this is my first novel and i'm trying to get as many reviews on it as possible. I'm trying to see how people's response is going to be on it, but no matter the review, all i need any to do is be honest with me. Is it good? Is it bad? Just be truthful and that's all, that's all i want. This is a part of the novel, sorry about it being so short, i had too because my computer missed up. I will upload the beginning though, i promise, just as soon as i find it on this crazy computer. :)

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