A reworking of my novel from the first person point of veiw. I would really like some honest feedback on this, even if you just read a couple of paragraphs and only comment on them I would still appreciate it.
It is about the ever fluctuating mental state of an especially unique vampire driven b...
The rain poured as my best friendâ€™s car drove off into the darkness. I waved, hoping that he had seen me.
â€œBecca, letâ€™s get inside. Youâ€™ll catch your death out here!â€ said my mum tapping me on the shoulder. I nodded and followed her inside. I turned to the road j...
| Updated Oct 30, 2009
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Relationship with people can be cruel, just because of the nature of human beings. A bond with a cat can be purer, especially both of you are young. Harshness of not knowing comes out in a child. Even worse if you are not an equal to that child. Intent in the relationship is good but real treatme...
You will never know my name. You will never know the names of the ones closest to me. This is the only way I can insure that you'll pay attention to the events that happen to me and not merely pay attention to the unimportant details. This is the story of my life from my bitter point of view. ...
The story is About two half blood brothers, whoever born on the same time and are considered responsible for all the problems in their family but Children are a symbol of love and respect so these two brothers will solve all the problems of their family and will live together till death.
| Updated Oct 25, 2009
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Ashley has always been classified as nerd, but that is only half of who she really is. she is really quite and shy so no one would expect her to be the legendary dancer that has rocked the clubs so many times before. But what happens when her best friend just so happens to fall in love with the m...