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OUR AMAZING and ROCKING BOOKSIE FAMILY

Novel By: Pratibha
Literary Fiction


this article is dedicated to this amazing family of mine....which stood by me in all weathers and now it's my turn to do my part.
THIS IS NOT A COUNTDOWN AND THE SERIAL NUMBERS ARE THE ORDERS OF MY VIEWING THEM ONE BY ONE AND NONE OF THEM ARE COMPETING WITH EACH OTHER.....

THIS ARTICLE WILL BE DEVOTED TO THE THEMES....ONLY THEMES....AND IMAGINATION AND TRUE CONFESSIONS AND DARING APPROACH AND WITH A MESSAGE....WOOOO HOOOOO DOESNOT THAT SOUND INTRESTING....YES IT IS...

EACH ONE IS BEAUTIFUL AND HONEST AND PURE.....THIS ARTICLE IS TO APPRECIATE THE BEAUTY OF WRITING AND INNOCENCE AND
PURELY UNADULTERATED BY ANY RANKINGS OR COMPETITION.....

LIKE A FAMILY LET'S UNITE AND ROCK.....

PLEASE PLEASE FORGIVE ME IF I HAVE MISSED ...WHICH I AM SURE I WILL .....PLEASE GET YOUR NEW POSTS TO MY ATTENTION and if u have any thing to share, please mail me at

pratibhabooksie@gmail.com
I WILL BE RIGHT THERE TO READ....PLEASE DO FORGIVE ME IF I MISS OUT....I WILL TRY MY BEST AND I NEED YOUR HELP AND GUIDANCE....

ARE YOU ALL WITH ME?
SHALL WE ROCK?

YES WE WILL.....HOORAY TO FRIENDSHIP, HOORAY FOR BOOKSIE FOR BRING US ALL TOGETHER ON ONE PLATFORM AND HURRAY FOR ALL OF US FOR BEING THERE FOR EACH OTHER...... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 11, 2008    Reads: 117    Comments: 14    Likes: 5   


 
Antipathy –  by Funny bunny (LIEN).
I'm so tired of the things I've done
I'm so tired of being me
I don't want to be like this
but I can't help myself
I've let myself go and everything I believe in
You will never meet someone like me again
Nobody can be as horrible as me
So self-centered and pathetic
 
CASSEOPEIA by PUNISHMENT

Sway with me in this night we both treasure
Death is not our mere pleasure.
But even though our wings may break,
Never fret my Cassiopeia, for my heart stays awake.
You sing noiselessly, cry soberly.
In the evening wind...
I HATE YOU – BY SARATOPIA
 
DREAMING IS REALITY by GHIRADELLI GIRL ( CHOCO)
 
“Tsunami! Tsunami!” a girl had burst into the room,
She was all a hurry;
All we had to do was go after our dreams,
Until we found them and woke up amongst our own kind,
And own time
I dare you to come with me, oh brave one and you’ll forget come morning—
Like I did, once upon a time
 
LEARNING TO SAY SORRY by Kaori:
You grow up saying it
Yet never used it seriously
Its harder than you think
Saying sorry to someone
Who won't listen.
So I'll just say it now.
I'm sorry.
UNREQUITED, UNREQUITED BY JAK SYLVIAN:
The unmistakeable ghost of you.
I’ve moved away now, we don’t ever talk
As far as things go we’d never have met,
Have you ever thought about things since I went
Answer is no, I’d hazard a bet.
What you don’t know and I’ll never say,
I still love you.....
FORBIDDEN MOMENTS BY PEARLINAOYSTER:
I still remember those moments,
Of our shared communion,
Reigned by my passion’s dominion.
My mind flew as high as a dove-
For I was surely in love!
Let in the deepest chamber of my heart
Dwell secretively those forbidden moments of love.
 
 PERFECT MERGE BY DEV (WHITE HART)
THIS ONE IS A SHORT STORY AND SO I HAVE HIGHLIGHTED THIS IN A DIFFERENT FORMAT....
DO READ THIS AND FALL IN LOVE AGAIN....SIMPLE ....INNOCENT...LOVELY....LIKE LOVE...ONLY LOVE
 
 
IN SEARCH OF UNKNOWN BY URJA:
In search of unknown I did fly
High in the limitless sky;
All my greatest dreams came true,
            I found that my unknown was you
 
CONTINUOUS DESTRUCTION BY WIKHAIINN:
-          When a heart is broken,
-          You can always have a chance to mend it,
-          When a glass falls apart,
-          You can always do your best to bring it back,
-          When a house falls down
-          You can always make a move to rebuild it up,
Could all the errors be erased?
-          How can that precious life be suddenly changed…
-          For the time elapsed may not be spin
-          Of a life once defined,
 
 
 
TWO SIDES TO EVERY STORY - STEPHHLEBRETON
-           
THIS IS ONCE AGAIN A SHORT STORY WITH A TWIST....I HAVE READ MANY SHORT STORIES BUT THIS ONE HAS AN ALTOGETHER DIFFERENT FLAVOR ......
 
IF I SPOKE SOFTLY BY KATIE
As you leave this land
you prepare to take with you
a small amount of hope and
promise.
Though as you go along your journey
you may have to reach deeper and
deeper at times to reconnect,
it is ever worth the while.
 SHORT CUT SINGER BY ANNA THERESA
TRUTH AND ONLY TRUTH....HONEST...
  
 


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Comments:

Woooo HOOOO....

Finally i did it....i had to change the entire format, delete the old one to update the NEW chapters....

ENJOY.....guys....

Any any comments and criticisms are welcome.....

Posted: May 11, 2008

Woohoo! Very excited. Can't wait to see what you have in store next! And a happy mommy's day to you!

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

*frustrated*
Buddy, it did not work and so i decided to post it separately as "Lovely booksie Family"

Hope u will like it.....

How is dissertation work coming up??

Always remember we all r with you....

Awww,, this was such a great idea...I'll be sure to check out the stuff I haven't yet on your list...you swwet heart you. haha. Take care bella!
Steph(:

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Steph :)
:)
*smiling*

Prathibha would you like us to contribute by pointing out some memorable works?
I read one this morning that touched me deeply (as do all his works...I presume a he? Boneman) From Boneman's "Discolation" came these two stanzas - of just many memorable stanzas and phrases - that resonated within me because I could "see" how the author is not himself when being controlled by his "seductress":

Somewhere a phone is ringing
I wish someone would answer it
It cannot be for me
As I am not here anymore

Somewhere someone is laughing
What do they find funny?
They are not laughing at me
As I went out hours ago

These lines truly make me weep - at the same time I can see the amazing, raw and real talent of this author and can also see the person he sometimes cannot see.

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Sure Anna I will love to...
Thanks a lot and i will immediately go and read that one NOW...
Sorry buddy, i am dropping this project. the chapters are not getting updated inspite of my trying hard till 3.00 to 4.00amevery day since past 3 days.
i am frustrated.
i am so sorry...i disappointed all of you.

Prathibha I think booksie is playing up a lot still (ever since the update) I now can no longer read comments given in reply to my comments unless I physically go in and look at the page it came from. So there are a lot I now no longer read as it is too time consuming. as I said to Bubbly on her top ten list I would like to see a comments page we could all contribute to to point out noteworthy writing and authors and themes etc. Like a discussion page or something? A challenge for the booksie controllers perhaps?

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

u r right Anna, even i am losing the zeal to work hard.

May be we can stay in contact via mail....that's the best way....i don't want to lose my friends in booksie at any cost

I will have to go read these works! Each one sounds lovely. I must agree with Anna Therese about Boneman's Dislocation. Truly awesome work there by a truly awesome person. Thank you for pointing out some worthwhile work!

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks DF, don't bother sweetheart. It;s not getting updated ...it stuck , just not getting updated
i am going to read Dislocation now....I loved the lines Anna sent me....

Aww, I've been so busy with studying for finals, that I never had the time to look at this, and I'm in it.

Thank you so much. I didn't get a lot of response on Learning to Say Sorry, so I assumed that no one liked it. Thanks for the vote of confidence.

~Kaori

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

don't worry Kaori , it takes lots of courage to admit that one is sorry and u have that.
hats off to you....sweetheart
keep up the great work....it's honest

Wow, that was really very inspiring. I am so happy to see my work voted. Thank you Pratibha for such a wise endeavor. LOL. :)

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

u deserve it sweet heart....i am just an messenger ....

I love it! I hope that there is more to come and that lots more people in our big family see this!!
With big eyes,
KR

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

NO KR, i am so sorry, i am dropping the project...it's not getting updated, i don't know why...
So sorry....
glad u liked it though...*smiles*....

Ohhhhhhhh (sigh) this is so good!!!!!
that's too bad it isn't working, but I am sure it could be fixed, although it must be alot of work to do though. Thankyou Pratibha for mentioning me, it really wasn't nessesary. I very much enjoyed reading the other peoples, it was AWESOMELY done by you!!!!!!
You so really did a good job!
~katie

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Katie...*Smiling affectionately* So like you....
Thanks LOVE...for being with me in all weathers...

YAY! Well done Pratibha! You have done an awesome job, and this is such a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing the best of Booksie with us! ~ Nixie

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Nic
Unfortunately i had to dump the project....conflict of intrest it seems...lol

:(

Pratibha, thank you so much. You spoil me! you're doing a great job on booksie. When i'm a famous writer one day, will you be my agent?
love Lien

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh yeah, for sure...with all my heart and soul...
thanks Lien...

Fantastic work Pratibha, a shame you had to put the project on the back burner, I hope not forever though??

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

yes JAK, i could not 'upload' new chapters inspite of trying for 1 week ....i gave up....

cool...! oh I read my name in it ^ ^

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

YEAH U R THERE BUDDY.....Ur writing has the SPARK....it is too good....awesome



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