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The Path of Time and Memories

Novel By: Robert Doust
Literary fiction

Time has passed. Memories are still floating in the air. A permanent image will remain in young Robert Makise, a highschool junior who six years before now, fell in love for the first time. After making the worst decisión of his life (he thinks it is), Robert is determined to either build a time machine himself or find someone who might be already doing it. His hopes for going back in time and fixing what he did will determine the world´s future, as he also decides to fix any other mistakes he remembers along the way. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Apr 28, 2013    Reads: 1    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

We headed to one of the many parks of the city and left Syan unconscious on a bench. Cloud showed a sad expression. I wanted to go back and take nap. Cloud sat emotionless and remained like that for a while longer. Syan told us as well that to fix everything, Cloud should use her powers to go back in time and prevent me from starting my journey. I could not allow that. I lived one of the most emotional moments and WON'T LET ANYONE TAKE IT FROM ME. But God planned otherwise.

¨I think I'll do it. After all, we are meant to be together, we will find each other very quickly. I know where Robert lives.¨ thought Cloud. She planned to take Robert's memories and change everything.

¨I know this is short, but let me get it straight. I won't go into details. Some things are best to be deduced rather than given. You should imagine and let yourself flow with the current.¨

¨I….. wish….for your complete ignorance…….¨ whispered Cloud to herself. I couldn't move and Cloud knocked me out unconscious with a special power.

¨My desire to erase your memories is half nothing. I can't take that from you. To think of your attempts to find me and how you suffered daily after every failure and me abandoning our life together as it is… I cry inside. Sorrow within my heart. I will only take some things. You will only remember fragments but none are from our adventure. Let this be, our finest hour. Live well Robert. I love you and hope you'll never forget me. Bye…for now.¨ said Cloud.

I woke up and it was still 2:00 am. Even so, I was happy to think of two more hours to sleep. It was August 4th, and I whispered ¨Happy Birthday¨ to her. I knew that she would not listen. If I could find her now, even if she slaps me for being a stranger and kicks me you know where, it'll be worth it. I discovered I loved Cloud some time ago and will never ever forget her. My childhood romance. My first love.

¨I guess everything is back to normal. Take care Rob. I'll see you when the time comes.¨ said her.

The End? Or the Beginning of a New Life? Whichever it is, I will live.

So long life!



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