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Submitted: Sep 29, 2007 Reads: 48 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
You’ve been hurt by unhealing pain and sadness.
Together we can carry each other’s indelible past
The darkness may overcome us
Even if it consumes your resounding voice and your fading smile, even so
If its scratched away by the winds of time
I will find you!
You and me two are spoken
Together will defeat the darkness, were destined for one another!
One day you’ll understand what I did for you.
One day we’ll understand each other.
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pretty darn good! :)
Posted: Sep 29, 2007
This is very good! Nice writing.
Posted: Sep 29, 2007
your poem was quite stunning, it almost seemed to me to have two different thoughts one being of speaking of two people whom have come together or one person with two sides of their mind and spirit. It was rather enveloping and sounded like me when I was a young girl. Great job kiddo. Always, Diane
Posted: Dec 1, 2007
You know, I think this poem would be a knock out in the composure of villanelle (google it)...it's a very interesting way of poetry and you seem to have a tight grasp on illustrative words. I am no professional but see the potential in your poetry. Give it a try? You have very luring poetry. Thanks for sharing.
Posted: Feb 10, 2008
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