Written - 11th February 2007

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This poems describes what happens when we stray from the path of a loved one. It's an intense and emotional depiction that makes several references to the Bible, mankind and evolution. View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 13, 2008 Reads: 119 Comments: 12 Likes: 8
Written - 11th February 2007
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Wow! Hey Tigerchill, this was some powerful stuff! Excellent poem! I do hope everything worked out for you. Looking forward to reading the rest of your work. Take care MD
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
Hey Tigerchill :) This poem is deep and there are so many things to be gleaned from its meaning. The first 2 lines really pulled me in and really set the tone. This is amazing and I can't wait to read more! Take care, Regan
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
This is pure beauty! The description above the poem alone, hooked me into it. Very descriptive piece and it contains a lot of meaning. I've never read one of your pieces before, and now I'm so glad to find someone with such great talent! I will defintiely be reading more of your work! Keep it up, you are an exceptional writer. =)
~Maple
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
Very Real. I like Real. It's not fake. Stay real.
Posted: Sep 9, 2008
I looooooooooooove this one! Of course it is intelligent, but I love it mostly because it is so true. I can really relate to it! It's also great to see something spiritual yet you are ballsy enough to put strong emotion with it by using a curse word. I am spiritual too but I'm not fake in any way... so if a curse word is needed, so be it. This is fantastic!
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
The first stanza isn't that good as compared to others. It is very abrupt. Seems to me like you suddenly got this urge and in hurry you just jot it down. The rest is VERY vivid. I am sure everybody else can relate to it too. You know what is one of the best qualities of your poems? they aren't specifically made for you. Very general; almost everybody can relate to them :p
Posted: Sep 17, 2008
The first stanza was incredible, the others followed suit. Brilliant work.
Posted: Sep 18, 2008
I love the imagery, the use of the tree and it's death. It's all so powerful, it just kinda pulls you in. The meter to it made it so smooth and clean, and the depth is just astounding. I didn't really know what to expect from reading the description, but it caught me by line two. It's so easy to relate to, because there is no much in life that we as humans do that we know we should not. It brings so many complex ideas together seamlessly. Fantastic!
Posted: Sep 18, 2008
Excellent - I really like it
Posted: Sep 25, 2008
Gave it an 'I like it'. It's definatly an interesting poem... Just trust in God and He'll guide you to what or whom you are supposed to meet and/or be with. =) At least, that's my opinion. =)
~Mandy
Posted: Sep 27, 2008
hi! tiger. this is a beauty. i'm tempted by chocs, cakes, ice creams and what not. were there no temptation, i wonder if attraction'll ever exist. temptation in its negativity is what u write here and that can be destructive to any relationship. u've a way with thoughts. keep it up. lol. ;-)
Posted: Sep 29, 2008
Fantastic work!
Posted: Sep 30, 2008
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