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Short Story By: stephhlebreton
Literary Fiction
well first off I would like to warn that it is a bit longer than your usual short story. but it is much to long to be considered otherwise, so here we are... View table of contents...
Submitted: Mar 19, 2008 Reads: 73 Comments: 9 Likes: 5
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Tres bien! Read my poem Time To Worry, s'il vous plait.
Posted: Mar 20, 2008
wowzers! that was great!! it was kinda sad but really good!
Posted: Mar 20, 2008
Hah, that was great! I loved the ending, it was perfect. ~ Nixie
Posted: Mar 22, 2008
Oooh :) I liked it... beautiful and sad.
Posted: Mar 25, 2008
Just read this again, you are very talented young lady. 15 thumbs up!
Posted: Mar 26, 2008
You have such unsuspecting endings!!!!! I feel like laughing right now^_^! You're awesome. I loved the story-- how it began and how it ended. Wow... I'm going to check out all of your work!!!!!
Lot's of special chocolate to you,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: Mar 26, 2008
Wow.
I was so not expecting that ending but as per usual it was awesome.
now im going to read your other storyy.
=]
-Ally
Posted: May 16, 2008
Steph, BRAVO! I love it. You put a spin on this one that was entierly you, which is great! It's my favorite of your stories so far for sure. I only want to add that with that in mind I think you should polish this one: fix the little gliche Im sure you already see it, refine and it truely will be bella! I love it again. Nice work!
Posted: May 17, 2008
WOW....a perfect ending....Served them right....
Posted: May 25, 2008
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