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Submitted: Jul 20, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


A Magician

by Sual Okin

 

 

 

            “For my grand finale, I shall pull a rabbit out of hat” said Edward Keller, the twenty-three year old prodigy of illusion.

            “Boo!” screamed one of the ten fans watching his street magic act. 

            This man seemed to be wearing a regular white t-shirt with jean shirts and blue Jeff Gordon race hat.  Edward took off his hat and showed it to the audience.  Obviously there was nothing in the hat at the time.  Then, magically, the illusionist pulled a black spotted, white, rabbit out of his hat.  The man who had screamed “Boo!” earlier once more screamed “If you want to amaze me, put some more hair on my head, I’m beginning to thin.” towards the magician.

            “The trick isn’t over yet sir.” said Keller towards the angry fan.

            Then, in an instant, the rabbit disappeared into thin air, and appeared inside the angry fan’s hat.  The man screamed like a little girl.  He threw the rabbit at the ground, but when it hit the ground, it evaporated. 

            “Why did you do that?” said the angry but somewhat amused fan.

            “You said you wanted more hare!” said Edward.

            “How did you do that?” asked the fan again.

            A magician, my fine sir, never reveals his secrets.

           


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haha. i love it:)

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, I'm only thirteen and love to write stories, This is one of many short stories that will I will be writing!

very funny and also a very cool cool ending.

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx

Haha lots of fun. Check out Slide of Hand. A bit more sinister, and maybe not to your tastes, but give it a shot anyways. Great stuff, though.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008



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