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Booksie Address:	http://www.booksie.com/matty6666
Country:	United Kingdom
Favorite book:	The pursuit of happyness
Member Since:	Sep 22, 2011

Featured Writing

A Song of Revolution

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Apr 8, 2013
A few topics of subjects which I think intertwine in the...

Writing Portfolio

A Song of Revolution

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Apr 8, 2013
A few topics of subjects which I think intertwine in the...

screams in my head

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Feb 7, 2013
Not been on here for a while so I thought I would write...

Rest In Peace (The First Verse)

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Dec 15, 2012
This is probably the deepest piece I have written. It has...

A Poets Sorrow

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Dec 14, 2012
I don't really have a moral behind this one! Normally I...

Grimey Tales Of Grange Valley!

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Oct 28, 2012
This is a poem for a story I'm working on. I have written...

Scared To Death!

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Sep 15, 2012
just a poem about fear, and how it can be damaging!

My Hearts Flame

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Aug 14, 2012
Just a piece of poetry I worked on in my spare time...

Father & I

Short Story by matty6666
Posted: May 9, 2012
Note (This short story has connections and exists in the...

A bloody burning Red Night

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Apr 20, 2012
A poem using a small piece of military slang. Enjoy...

The Tides of Trust

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Mar 23, 2012
Poetic style: Keatsian Ode (A-b-a-b-c-d-e-c-d-e)...

Dr Murphy's and the Purple Box

Short Story by matty6666
Posted: Mar 11, 2012
Follow a story about a man broken from loss. How he...

Angst (Ignore Previous)

Poem by matty6666
Posted: Feb 15, 2012
An angsty poem

Death on a wave!

Short Story by matty6666
Posted: Dec 21, 2011
How would you feel if you stood face to face with death?...

Insight Into The Mind Of A Stoner: Fate

Article by matty6666
Posted: Dec 18, 2011
Hello fellow readers, on occasion (most nights) I like to...

Insight Into The Mind Of A Stoner: The Sphere of Reality

Article by matty6666
Posted: Dec 8, 2011
Hello my name is Mathew, on occasion (most nights) I like...

Kiaras whereabouts

Short Story by matty6666
Posted: Oct 26, 2011
A brother obsessively searching for his lost sister. Will...

Kiaras Escape

Short Story by matty6666
Posted: Sep 22, 2011
A story of a woman who is trapped in a dark room. Her...

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May 23, 2012
My Poetry is about to turn really dark! Not for the faint hearted! Enjoy my dark and sadistic mind :D

May 10, 2012
I'm going to be bringing a halt to my short stories now as I want to push myself into the realm of Comic's! However I will still upload Poems every know and again! Never fear I will return!

Feb 21, 2012
Question everything! Especially authority. - Albert Einstien

Critique List

I am writing this list to help remember the major critiques I have gained of recent, this way I know what I have to improve on. Thank you all for giving me this information.

Punctuation, I think I need to go back to basics here.
Flow in poetry Ill look into Iambic pentameter's - (I have started to constraint my poetry with sylables, I am still playing around with this constraint, but know I wonder why I never used it before.)
Not so many scenes in one chapter, slow it down!
Grammar I think I should revise sentence structure. (From the amount of feedback I have recieved on grammar lately I now see this as a weakness that I need to improve on)

This will be updated as more critiques are given, If I feel what somebody has said relates to a section i have already listed I won't add it.

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