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A piece about the loss of love and what that loss does to the way a person, literally, sees. Appeared in Missouri Review, 1987. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 21, 2008    Reads: 47    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   



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How is it decided which space you spend your life in?
Yes, the soul does go crazy.
Are some people more free because they truly found "their space"?
So, in 1987 your son was 4...now years later...did someone crush his space and he is like every other human?

Just wondering...quite the philosopher you are...I enjoyed this very much as I have my own unique ideas about the universe.

Posted: Mar 22, 2008



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