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My Reflection The Mirror

By: B Leaf
Memoir


Tags: untitled, poem, song, b, leaf, poetry

This is a song I wrote on one night View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 22, 2008    Reads: 29    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Song # 1 Untitled

I'm afraid of this world

I'm afraid of my head

I'm afraid of my words

I'm cast into self hatred

They see me for who I'm not

In their eyes they pretend

I'm something more than my disguise

They see through me into who I really am

Into who I really am

This is my life

The dawning of all that loves

All that hates

They flood me with emothions

Quick open up the gates

Here I am this is the real me

With my heart spill my blood

It is dry can yout tell that I've felt

One to many lies

Why do I hide who I am

Why do I surpress my love for you

This is why I'm nothing more than human.

Will you look at this beast

I have become a vampire to a mirror

Not seeing myself and what I've done

I thank you who gave me

The respect for myself

The love for another

Will this be a world I need

Can I be

What I see in me

Is this reflection me

Is the who I want to be

Is this who I am

Is this relly me.



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Comments:

Very Nice, B.

I like some of the phrases, such as I have become a Vampire-but not a real one-just the reflection.

Hope all is well,

Ted

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

This reminds me sooo much of my first main character, I'm really glad you wrote it. It's one of those things where no one really knows what you are, and yet they think you a certain thing, and so sometimes you feel like they're right. And you could become that thing, and is there really a difference? Some of my characters deal with that, since they're not technically human, but they're not what you'd think they are, either. And I'm rambling, so I'll shut up now...

Posted: Oct 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Don't worry I hear where you are coming from. I'm glad that you write about some of the same things. It makes me think of the ending of Neon Genesis Evangelion the way you described it. SO please keep rambling I like it.

Hey, I just checked the list of return comments, thanks for them. The end of EVA was crazy, I'm still not so sure I understand it. Post some new stuff so I can try and ramble some more :P

Posted: Nov 8, 2008



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