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We had a surprise party for my dad.... Just read it. I know it's just a couple of paragraphs, but I enjoyed watching his reaction. View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 10, 2008 Reads: 47 Comments: 9 Likes: 2
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ohhhooooohhhhhhh ^_^
how special MA!
I had the giggles for a bit thinking 'the poor man he could of had a heart attack LOL
oh, all in all, all the preparation was well worth it huh?
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
So, so nice. Thanks for sharing it. We are all a bunch of short stories, aren't we. Ted
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
I like your story 'cause everyone feels good! All of you giving the surprise birthday party and your Dad being surprised!!
What a lovely memory you have made!!.....Jerry
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
This is so joyous yet made me cry. I too have the most wonderful "surprise" party. On my 40th my hubby and sister arranged a surprise party, the biggest surprise my mother making the trip for the event (she was ill then and rarely travelled too far) How everyone kept it a surprise I have not a clue - but my reaction was exactly as you describe. What a wonderful daughter you are!
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
aww, that's cute and sweet!
I loved reading it!
Posted: Aug 11, 2008
aww that was very vivid! I loved it, I bet you had fun.
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
Where are you, MA???? Haven't heard from you since the surprise party!!! Give a holler, will you?!!!!
Jerry
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
So sorry I just found this, but I loved it! I'm a great big sucker for snapshots in time and this one was so full of excitement and anticipation and joy. I've always been a little afraid that the very things that at the time I'm sure I'll never forget, I will. And that seems to be happening a lot more the older I get!
I'm so glad you committed this one to paper and I'm really happy that you invited us to the party!
Thanks! ~ Sheryl
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
MA, that was so cool.. and I enjoyed it. I almost felt as if I was there. I can just imagine the look on his face the moment everyone yelled "surprise". I have never had or given a surprise birthday party, but I've always been one to fantasized about them.
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
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