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It's all about freedom. I've finally learned how to live my life without hindrance - after years of searching, I've discovered the secret. (This is just one of many poems I plan to write about my newfound light!) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 7, 2007    Reads: 60    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


I've been bottled up

Year after year

I've held on close

To my deepest fears

 

My life was dry

I never imagined I'd

Be able to fly,

Able to make my dreams come true

 

But everything changed

I have a new outlook

I've suddenly blossomed

Like a princess in a book

 

Yet unlike a fairy tale

My life is not full of magic

But the ordinary things

No longer seem tragic

 

I'm finally free

I've broken the curse

Declared the victory

And claimed the gold purse

 

The trial is over

Though more will come,

I am ready to fight-

I've discovered the beat of my own drum.


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Comments:

Very inspirational.
Nicely written and very... warm, is that the right word?
Great work, I quite liked it! :)

Posted: Jun 7, 2007

Your light does shine. Keep on sharing it with us.
Beautiful poem -- full of hope and joy.

Posted: Jun 7, 2007

Beautiful Simplicity:

Another great job. "From the darkness into the light: sadness into happiness: frustration into fulfillment".

Liked it. Nice use of rhyming.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jun 7, 2007



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