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The Takeover

Poem By: MBQ
Memoir


Story about my relationship with Scott
Who I love

and the other Scott
Who tried to suffocate me to death last night
My dog saved me.

A dream? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 28, 2007    Reads: 33    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


 

Scott I know it not you

 

Not you the one I know

 

To have stolen from me

 

 

Scott you were a brief glimpse

 

I saw you not that much

 

that the Scott I loved

 

 

He doesn't want you to know!

 

He'll KILL ME first,

 

ANYTHING to stop you realising

 

that it is YOU is HIM

 

Merged now forever within

 

and I know it my shit

 

That HE DEMANDED

 

That fed him

 

 

GIVE ME ONE MOMENT YOU CUNT ASSHOLE THING!

 

 

I'm sorry my Darling

 

You Scott, My Scott

 

You know my love

 

You can't feel my loss

 

And so why

 

I'm not happy

 

To have  survived.

 

 

Goodbye

 


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Comments:

Um...Not sure what to say really! Interesting.

Posted: Jul 28, 2007

Author Comment:


Ive never done this before - but I guess a response is a reaction so I think thats good.
writing this poem helped explain things (my dream i mean)
the fine line between between love and murder (not premeditated)is finer than we think
and how evil takes over in many so quickly you can see it
I think a murderer could be a loving person Im sure even moments before and how much responsibility should all those involved take for this type of thing maybe my poem might help us all look at things like that even if done in ignorance



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